ok I decided to post something positive first because I realized I was being kind of brutal, but its brutal love ok?

You have no problem coming up with melodies that work well together and the vocal is pretty cool 
I like the idea as a whole, it just could use a lot of work.

The quick rolling notes get really repetitive fast dude.  When the notes go higher every 8 bars, it should be doing that every 16 bars, because that gets repetitive really fast as well.  The notes you chose are fine though, I wont analyze it because I would choose different ones but these notes work just fine. 

The bass is too loud and the kick basically has no presence at all, figure out the best kick/bass relationship you want in the EQ so they can both have their own space without diminishing their presence.  Actually go ahead and try to separate and EQ all of your sounds a little better, push yourself I know you can do it 

The piano melody needs to be scrapped for a better one. A memorable one.  This one has awkward rhythm and is just blah. So really work on that the most honestly.

2:44-3:18 this can be a much better transition, it goes into a much different vibe.

Anyways thats all I've got for ya   

Is it healthy to force yourself to write music even when you dont want to or are facing a creative block?

For me, its healthy to an extent.  I have found myself in Fadex's state of mind plenty of times.  Simply put, you just have to keep pushing.  Even when im feeling discouraged, I will still open up my DAW and just start throwing stuff against the wall and see what sticks.  Often times, I breakthrough the wall of discouragement im feeling.  It really is like a wall, because if you chip away at it (opening up your DAW when feeling discouraged) you will eventually (could be a couple hours or a couple days) be so glad that you did.  I promise

Alot of people give up when its hard, without knowing that there are fulfilling rewards on the other side of that wall.  Just try it 

Intro sounds like video game music for the menu screen of a cool game! Also, that chord progression is identical to a track I've heard before, thats neither a good or bad thing Im just writing in a stream of consciousness.  The Piano sounds kind of weak, and then the square layer that you layer on top of the piano sounds like its from a nursery rhyme, which makes me take the track less seriously. 

BUT, at :50 when it drops its quite nice. The sounds come together nicely.  The rhythm of the main lead is lacking though, and for the piano as well.  Work on finding a good rhythm because right now it sounds like you didnt put much thought into it.

Anyways keep it up, you're on the right track!

the intro is weak but yea this is pretty damn cool    you should keep working on it!

Thanks Larkspur!

About the plucks.  The reason why they sound so full is because I layered them with a bass(cut out the mids and highs), and just EQ'd them together to make them seem like one single sound  

Now go try it! 

Thanks trill, that is the trillest comment ever.

Lydian, I will let you know when Im done =)

You're sexy af.


Alright Ill finish it 

If I tell you, I will have to kill you.

Yea dude, you should go ahead and try to finish this.  Simplicity is just as beautiful as the complex.  You could keep it that way and just add a couple counter melodies and a good breakdown and add finishing touches with transitions and tension building and what not.

Good job! keep up the good work