Good start. Feels empty though. The bass sound is also too bland. Using a white noise with it and some light distortion would help. Also sounds like its 1 or 2 wavetables going. Try using more and doing more with layering? It's got a solid start.

http://hyperphysics.phy-astr.gsu.edu/hbase/sound/maxsens.html

^ that is an important thing in mastering. So many people forget that the human ear hears different frequencies in different volumes. Master accordingly!

If you have an eq that can do left/right eq'ing that also is a HUGE thing to not lose certain sounds or you drums in a mixdown.

If you want any 1 on 1 help, more info, or tips, feel free to message me and we can skype or I can take a look at the FLP if you use FL and help you learn!

Gramatik comes to mind, so does GRiZ and The Floozies, but those acts lean more on the funky side, whereas I've always associated Oliver with more a disco and 80s feel, similar though. Another one would be Madeon, I love Oliver's remix of Madeon's "You're On" (https://soundcloud.com/madeon/youre-on-ft-kyan-oliver-remix). Also some of Mat Zo's more funky/disco-y music, AND Lemaitre too!

I looooovvvvvveeeeee Oliver though, definitely one my favorite groups out there, wish more people were aware of them (or at least where I'm from hah). It took me a little bit to think of something similar, because Oliver has such a distinct sound, that aspect of their music is something any producer should aspire to, imo!

Here are some links from the aforementioned artists:
https://soundcloud.com/griz/summer-97-ft-muzzy-bearr?in=griz/sets/chasing-the-golden-hour-pt-1
https://soundcloud.com/griz/get-down-ft-sunsquabi-and-manic-focus?in=griz/sets/say-it-loud
https://soundcloud.com/griz/simple-ft-the-floozies?in=griz/sets/rebel-era-1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BC_Ya4cY8RQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tAhT6kFWkAo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgDMeLEqvYY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqkzR0sdtuU
https://soundcloud.com/matzo/soul-food-club-mix
https://soundcloud.com/matzo/mat-zo-ft-the-knocks-get-down-2-get-up

Also I just discovered Fred Falke he has an 80s vibe to him. Ranging from house to funk to others. Check him out!

Gramatik comes to mind, so does GRiZ and The Floozies, but those acts lean more on the funky side, whereas I've always associated Oliver with more a disco and 80s feel, similar though. Another one would be Madeon, I love Oliver's remix of Madeon's "You're On" (https://soundcloud.com/madeon/youre-on-ft-kyan-oliver-remix). Also some of Mat Zo's more funky/disco-y music, AND Lemaitre too!

I looooovvvvvveeeeee Oliver though, definitely one my favorite groups out there, wish more people were aware of them (or at least where I'm from hah). It took me a little bit to think of something similar, because Oliver has such a distinct sound, that aspect of their music is something any producer should aspire to, imo!

Here are some links from the aforementioned artists:
https://soundcloud.com/griz/summer-97-ft-muzzy-bearr?in=griz/sets/chasing-the-golden-hour-pt-1
https://soundcloud.com/griz/get-down-ft-sunsquabi-and-manic-focus?in=griz/sets/say-it-loud
https://soundcloud.com/griz/simple-ft-the-floozies?in=griz/sets/rebel-era-1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BC_Ya4cY8RQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tAhT6kFWkAo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgDMeLEqvYY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqkzR0sdtuU
https://soundcloud.com/matzo/soul-food-club-mix
https://soundcloud.com/matzo/mat-zo-ft-the-knocks-get-down-2-get-up

I literally know every artist and every song you posted xD hahaha all good stuff.

I mean specifically that 80s house vibe. I tweeted at them once saying their sound is like an 80's version of the future and they told me that that's EXACTLY what they were going for. It's just so unique I literally think that there isn't a single other artist who makes music like them, or even closely similar. I just want more Oliver ALLL the time. I found out who they were like 2 weeks after they JUST came to town. Haven't been back since. Still so so so so so sad about that one. I need them in my life all the time.

In general I dislike them simply because I enjoy sound design so much and experimenting. But at the same time I'm not opposed to using one or 2 where need be. I'm just against people in general only using presets and never learning any sound design. Be creative! But if you hear a sound that you vibe to and would just be PERFECT, then use it! Why pass up a sound that you love?

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<-- This is Bob.
Bob freezes his tracks.
Bob is smart.
Be like Bob.

( ...no for real, it's slower, but it helps. )

You mean just stop working on them for a while? My problem is that I literally can't move forward on these tracks due to what I have computer wise. As well as I'm always learning new things whether it be sound design, mastering, etc, and I want to continue to apply them. So I just keep starting over and over with new tracks.

I just hate not having a job. Agh. Need that cash.