I second what above commenter said about low quality sounding. I'm assuming you're using sylenth for this. Sylenth's white noise will do that. It's better to use a different white noise and chain it in like it's coming from the patch naturally. Sylenth's white noise can just be a bit janky for progressive trance as it already tends to use a lot of those higher frequencies with risers, sweepers, snares, and high hats.
Just use a different white noise, chain it in, and eq it and you should be all good.
Progression is nice. I reaaaaallllyyy dig progressive trance. Jason Ross and Ilan Bluestone being my 2 favorites.
Melody is solid as well just repetitive enough to be stuck in your head, but not be annoyingly so.
Fantastic job on the composition!

Keep it up and I'd LOVE to hear the finished result.
Edit: On second listen I'd suggest changing the build up to the drop as it's a little long for how typical it is. Make something more unique, rhythmic pre-drop. It'll add a lot into the groove and dynamic of the track!