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WIPs / Re: Daft project.
« on: February 24, 2016, 12:54:07 am »
shameless bump because ultimately this is the version i will be moving forward on
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The high pitch sound that is in the kick is a little annoying to me. And I think you could get a bit simpler with the main synth, and add some more variation. The second synth that comes in is pretty sweet. Main is would be EQ your kick and bass a bit as you said, and try simplifying the chords a bit.
For vocals I think some incoherent sort of chopped vocals like Bonobo would work well.
Keep at it!
Thank you guys for listening![]()
Now with the vocals are you talking about the more male sounding one that is through out?
or the one I'm doing a slight rhythm with in the first half of the song?
When I listened to it again I think you guys were talking about the more male sounding one that through out. Its not really cutting through the mix to my ear and is really behind in the mix but not in a good way.
I think it's the one that plays throughout the song. My opinion is that it fits the dark aspect of the song, but is too dominant and used too excessively.
Mabye try to filter it out or make it more subtle in some other way and use it less? Otherwise a great track!
It's quite bizarre. The hi hats are almost completely panned to one speaker, and they're too loud.
The bass hook you've got is also too loud and kind of distorted? At speakers half way my entire room shakes. 30 seconds of the song is too bland and takes too long to progress, or doesn't really have enough elements in it to keep it interesting.
The piano/mallet around 1 minute doesn't really flow into the start of the song, and i just generally dont feel like the two themes blended together well at all towards the end of the song.
At 1 minute there's just too much going on, the amount of notes the glockenspiel or piano is playing is just trying to compete with the bass hook and the vocal slice.
I've always said this, if you're going to have an aggressive sound, you can't be playing other aggressive sounds at the same time - if you're going to, you really have to know what you're doing.
I found some parts of the glockenspiel-thingo kinda cool though, where you played a bunch of notes real fast. I actually found that pretty interesting,
good luck!