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Daft project.
« on: February 21, 2016, 03:36:54 am »
Just started this, would like some quick feedback. I wanna keep it low tempo and want to add either vocals or pads but don't know if that will be to much  ??? I know when the bass comes in I have to do some EQing it sounds off.
How the composition?


« Last Edit: February 24, 2016, 12:53:38 am by armanip »

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Re: Daft project.
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2016, 06:32:56 pm »
The high pitch sound that is in the kick is a little annoying to me. And I think you could get a bit simpler with the main synth, and add some more variation. The second synth that comes in is pretty sweet. Main is would be EQ your kick and bass a bit as you said, and try simplifying the chords a bit.

For vocals I think some incoherent sort of chopped vocals like Bonobo would work well.

Keep at it!

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Re: Daft project.
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2016, 01:56:52 am »
The high pitch sound that is in the kick is a little annoying to me. And I think you could get a bit simpler with the main synth, and add some more variation. The second synth that comes in is pretty sweet. Main is would be EQ your kick and bass a bit as you said, and try simplifying the chords a bit.

For vocals I think some incoherent sort of chopped vocals like Bonobo would work well.

Keep at it!


I need to mess with the gate on the vocals but you get the idea. also realized the lead i the beginning might of sounded like to much because i was using holy scales and an arp -_-  didn't change the high pitch kick but i know i have a better sample in mind just couldn't find it yet. think i got some of that gargle out of the bass when it drops. want to add some phasing to the vocals just to give it a bit more stereo and movement.



This is with that high tuned kick sound filtered out a bit and vocal side chain vs gating like in last one. need to fix EQ after that 2nd lead drops. it sounds flat now and that first arp lead sticks to out and doesn't sound to good

« Last Edit: February 22, 2016, 03:12:06 am by armanip »

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Re: Daft project.
« Reply #3 on: February 24, 2016, 12:54:07 am »
shameless bump because ultimately this is the version i will be moving forward on