So I'm listening to the Tell Me Why [VIP] I like your sounds in it and how its kind of trippy but the one thing I feel like, is it has so many different styles and switches between all of them so much that its hard me to grab onto something that really grabs my attention ya feel me? I think your on a good track with production but should have more of a focus.

i feel like the drop isn't wide enough. good build to it but when the drop came I would say add more umph. how much reverb is in the vocals and lead? I feel like if my ears are correct that could be one thing that is muddying that area. maybe turn the lead down a tab. it's really bright. wheres everything panned to? phaser is good for adding some space to let things breath in the mix.

Hope this helps. if you have splice and ableton maybe i can help?