My strongest tracks I've spent months on, but only hours at time. I have large portfolio and like to skip around a lot, and also a college student so I don't have all the time in the world. . I'm finally to the point were I have some finished songs and I also have about 50 other projects that are at various levels of completion. I have release plan set to put out a track every month. I think it will be a lot easier for me to put finishing touches on at least one of my wip per month, than if I had to deal with coming up with ideas from scratch. Just my way of working, thought I'd share.

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Definitely needs a good mix down/master throughout the track but the arrangement is great haha, i busted up laughing when i heard the drop its so awesome.

maybe try a filter sweep on your white noise instead of just volume automation. it kind of takes away from the synths when it comes in.

gel time seems like it has alot of potential maybe with the a different arrangement you could use what you have as an intro/chorus and then build it up to something else? I felt like it was going to go somewhere but stayed with the progressive vibe. Just my two cents

and with a little mixing here and there, that bassline could totally work you should incorporate it.

what really sticks out to me is how your main lead sound gets kinda lost in the mix when it drops, i believe its due to too much reverb on the effects/vocals and phasing from the effects with your main lead noise, I would try to do some more eq adjustments and definitely try to do some panning on your drums the sit dead center in the mix.

 I find that it helps alot when you nudge certain things to the left and right a little bit. Also try eqing away conflicting frequencies where your clap sits cause it feels like it gets lost at times. especially on my studio monitors.

the white noise/shakers could also do a lot better with some more groove/possibly different samples. they come across pretty clear but kind of sound weak. Something that might help would be to apply some saturation/distortion to them. if the vocals already have too much reverb you can always try to apply a gate effect with a low threshold to try and tame it.

Your idea is great but i think you might to need to spend more than today on it to get it up to standard quality, but please by all means prove me wrong.

good luck!

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try eqing away some of the bass where your clap/snare sits because it sounds like its getting lost especially in the second drop. the first time the grainy bass comes in you have a snare topper that compensates for this but it doesnt come in on the second drop so i would say either add that or do some eq cuts on the bass. or you could try centering your bass in the mix and widening your clap. experiment with different ways to get everything clear. sometimes unorthodox tricks work pretty well.