I have to say man, I can definitely hear your improvement. I know we've shared feedback a few times and you've improved immensely since I last listened to your stuff.
The most glaring thing I noticed was the drop pluck. It needs more layers. Think along the lines of Arty - Flashback. Add some lower super saw layers underneath.
Also, I would say make those pumping pads that you have underneath louder and wider. They could definitely stand out more.
For your breakdown pluck, I would recommend the same thing. Maybe another layer or two. I have been obsessed with using layer upon layer lately even for smaller sounds like that and it can go a loooong way in the sense of creating space.
Keep it up man!
Ps. if you wanna put in some feedback for meh
https://theproducersforum.com/index.php?topic=2712.0