Really like the dreaminess of the intro, though the synths and samples used seem underprocessed to me. Like there are good things going on, but not enough EQ, reverb, or other effects are used.

I would love to hear some bass at 0:37. I really like the break into the heavier dreamy section, however with some lows and low/mids, it would really be impactful. I think a sub bass would do especially well here.

Oh wow, I love your percussion work at 0:55. All the samples are very crisp and clean and fit very well with the rest of the mix.

Like i said, I love the dreamy vibe you have here. Keep going with this, it has definite promise!

The synth and FX work in the intro are great, sounds very professional. I love the brooding swell at 0:29/0:30 as well, it's very sinister and carries a lot of weight in the mix.

The bass is mixed well when it comes in with the triplets. I would work on the timbre with your little blips like the one at 1:13 though, give them some more natural sound like hitting a wood block. I really like the sidechain work with the vocals, and they're mixed very well.

It's a really beautiful track so far man! I love how it has the elements of psytrance, techno and big room all at the same time, they all work well together in the mix. Definitely keep going with this one!!

I like the synth at the beginning, but I think there might be too much reverb on everything.

Oh wow that bass comes in hard. Is it stereo? If so I'd definitely put all of it in the middle of the mix and leave it as tight as possible - panning and bass doesn't mix well. The lyrics aren't bad either, but they don't stand out very much in the mix.

Nice drop, especially starting at 1:16. I still think there's too much reverb going on, but it's hard as can be and is mastered pretty solidly.

I'd maybe lay off using the synth throughout the entire track and leaving the percussion off in parts to let the track breathe a bit, but what you have so far is really hard and I like it. Keep running with this one for sure.

Cool little synth intro, and I like the laugh sample. I would actually take out that hit immediately following though, I think just the first elements are enough.

I like the kick and snares, though I'm going to be nitpicky - I wish the kick was louder, and the snares have just a touch too much reverb right when they come in. As other elements are added it's just fine, but maybe gradually build it up instead of just dropping it right in.

Holy cow I love the melody, especially when it really comes out at 0:42. What synthesizer did you use for that lead? It's really really well done. And when the bass comes in...man this track is really nice.

The drop at 1:30 is cool, but some of the effects seem overprocessed. One synth in particular that comes in at 1:33 has way too much reverb on it, and drowns out the other elements.

Really great ideas and elements so far though man. I'd like to hear some more low/mid range, but I love the Mario samples and the general vibe to this track is great.

Holy cow man, those kicks are gorgeous. Great sidechaining as well, and solid synth backup. I wish the vocals had some more reverb though.

When the snare comes in at 0:30 I'm left wanting a little more. I would perhaps shorten up the sample (lower the 'out') and bring the volume up some as well. The percussion other than that sounds really good though.

The guitar that starts at 1:15 is pretty nice and a good idea, but I wish it was processed a little more. Adding some reverb and delay to that sound plus some more high end would do wonders. Also when the hat comes in at 1:45 I'm not sure if I like that much panning to the left. Since not much else is going on right there, I think a hat placed right in the middle would work better.

The drop at 3:00 is kinda underwhelming. I would definitely take out the rides on every beat, and give the lead some more depth and reverb. There just seems to be something missing in the low/mid range as well. I think a heavier pad right here would do wonders.

Oooooo, I do not like the snare-type sample that starts at 4:30. It doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the percussion to me, and sounds a little too off-beat for my taste. I understand the want for syncopation and varying snare timing for more vibe, but I think it's a hair overdone here.

Really really nice work so far on this though, it sounds super professional. Almost forgot to mention by the way that I really like the bass work - it fits really nicely.

You should let me know when the full track's done, I'd love to hear the finished product. 

Just a WIP so far obviously, but definitely looking for other things to add to this track.

Any and all comments/criticisms are welcome and encouraged.

Oh man, really love the intro with the light synths and bass. The atmosphere it creates is really awesome.

Tooooooo much high pass filter on the vocals. If they were just straight up, it would sound incredible. This could've been unavoidable due to ripping the vocals though. I like the unique and slightly different chord progression you used as well, it's fitting and really nice.

Not bad on the main section. I wish the buildup would've had a little more to it, but it doesn't take anything away from the vibe. I think the percussion elements may be a bit too loud in this section as well, but I love the synth work.

Solid remix man, nice work! Too bad Soundcloud took it down!