NICOTINE AND FUCKING LOTS OF NICOTINE

The lowpassed percussion is cool, but it leaves the high end of the track kinda hollow. This is just my opinion, but some stabby high end rich percussion here and there would bring some interesting elements to this track. Also, some hiend rich snares and fx would beef this up too.

The break? at 1.50 is kinda weird, i guess it's supposed to be like an message of some sorts but it feels to sudden to me.

Overall i think this is really good, i feel it's a mellow background or menu music or something. I also like all the details u've put in there. These were just some of my thoughts.

Really solid, reminds me of Boards of Canada for some reason.

I really cant say much, it's really well mixed, but sometimes I feel the mix is too crowded or slightly muddy.

I wish I could give some more feedback but honestly I cant think of anything.

I have no background in music and while I can make decent compositions I often feel like I have no clue what fuck I'm doing. For example sometimes writing chords feels frustrating because I don't know how to continue and I just fuck around with notes and stuff until something coherent comes out. I have no idea how to write harmonies or anything cool like that.

I think knowing theory wouldn't hurt, but it's not something you'll absolutely need to be a DJ Bassmeister 808. In electronic music it's a easier to get away without having a musical background but you can definitely hear if someone has a background in music.

Of course everyone should know that you should (usually) stick to some scale etc. You can go a long way with basic theory. I just wish I had played piano or somehting when I was younger, I'm sure it would've had a great influence on my music.

This is plain awesome. This is the kind of music that I started to listen when i discovered electronic music. Keep it like this, don't make too many changes! The "drop" and breakdown work well too I like how it's not overdone by those mindless and annoying snare rolls

Thanks I was pretty afraid this track was gonna turn out cheesy as fuck, "Monstercat"-like so to speak. Anyway i think it turned out ok, the only thing I fear is too cheesy is the annoying "solo" but fuck it.

Thanks to anyone who gave feedback I'll be sure to return the favor.

https://soundcloud.com/ikis/cheddar

Allright, I added and fixed shit based on your opinions. It should be pretty much done. "Mastering" is also pretty much done, not much to it tho.

Any last critique before I wrap this bitch up and leave it to rot?

It's distorting pretty bad, not sure if thats what you're after. I dont really like the melody, its pretty annoying but the bass complextro stuff is pretty cool!

I'd make the lead/melody thingy less weird and take it easier on compression/clipping whatever you're doing here. The vocal chops sound really nice.