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WIPs / Re: First ever remix attempt wip
« on: November 13, 2016, 07:49:40 am »
I think your instruments need to be quieter or the vocals need to be louder but I really like the vibes on this one the drop flows really well! Just fix the vocal volume (and maybe the transition from the drop to verse 2) and it'll be great :D

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WIPs / Supernatural- The XTRA Quiet Edition
« on: November 10, 2016, 04:41:18 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/supernatural-v1/s-eCJeQ

    I came to the conclusion that I suck with ozone so this is basically exported straight from Ableton and uploaded it so its really quiet but regardless of all that... What do you guys think of it? I have an updated version of it I'm finishing up but its basically just an outro (there's no drop 3) so this is the bulk of the song. This is normally not my style but I wanted to learn how make a vocal lead and I did :D

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WIPs / Re: Sad Machine Remix WIP
« on: November 04, 2016, 05:06:16 pm »
The lead on the drop is sorta repetitive but I really like this its so smooth but I feel like it has a lot more melodic potential that could really send it from good to great and the kick and snare are right where they should be volume wise nice work on this

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WIPs / Habit Remix :D
« on: October 30, 2016, 07:52:15 am »
https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/habit/s-eK3pv

    Started this remix a couple of days ago, the layout of it is done pretty much but I'm not done with it yet... What do you guys think? Any feedback would be much appreciated :D

https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/habit4/s-QC3ax

   I made a lot of changes on this version and I personally think its a lot better now and the vocal chop thing is the same I really tried to switch it but I literally could not no matter, thanks a lot guys

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WIPs / Re: Progressive trance
« on: October 29, 2016, 01:06:59 am »
I think it needs a proper mixdown before I can really judge it but it sounds pretty good so far but the mix is throwing it off a little

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WIPs / Re: Neurohop / Glitch Hop WiP?
« on: October 24, 2016, 03:36:06 am »
I really like it... And that's seriously all I have to say about it

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WIPs / Re: A new dubstep wip honoring fuckgirls
« on: October 24, 2016, 03:34:40 am »
The kick has very little presence in the overall mix and the synths don't seem to have much bass... It sounds good but it just needs a little more power I guess.

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WIPs / Re: i dont know what this is missing
« on: October 19, 2016, 03:56:16 am »
The only problem that I have with it is that the pattern that you used for the lead is a little weird compared to the beat sometimes... It sounds really good other than that it just sounds off sometimes.

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WIPs / Re: Alt-j - Breezeblocks Remix WIP
« on: October 09, 2016, 02:57:12 pm »
The beginning is SO good I love the vocals it just sounds great all around but the drop seems to take it in a different direction flow wise than I was expecting... It's not bad, its just that it feels like the first part of the song was going on, and then it was a different song at the drop.

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WIPs / Re: Volatile - New trap wip inspired by Stranger Things
« on: October 07, 2016, 07:46:55 pm »
The string thing you have going on all throughout the song is really really repetitive and the 808 you used in the drop is off key (the snare should probably have a little bit more presence as well) and the hi hats have too much reverb (I think it might be your sample). Maybe change it up a bit and make it have more variety.

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WIPs / Re: Orchestral/Soundtrack
« on: October 04, 2016, 10:33:20 pm »
Weird question but what university do you go to? And it definitely has a good chill vibe to it but I'd have to hear a drop to get the full idea because right now it sounds like the soundtrack to a documentary on native americans or something :P

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WIPs / Re: First half of a tech trance track
« on: October 02, 2016, 12:07:47 am »
Is this some sort of extension of that other song that you made? That part at the end sounds really familiar... Other than that it sounds fine you seem to pretty good at making trance :P

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WIPs / Re: [Future Garage WIP] Storm Infinity - Prelude to a Lost Midnight Dream
« on: September 30, 2016, 03:41:26 am »
That rim hit thing that you included at around 1:50 is too loud, the mix sounds fine other than that, but that sound in particular is too loud...

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WIPs / Re: bass /underground /hiphop /trap
« on: September 29, 2016, 05:34:18 pm »
The sound design on this is interesting but the sounds you used aren't mixed very well... Some of the sounds you used are really fucking loud and that sound you have in the beginning is quiet in comparison and the vocal thing you have in the background throughout the drops is pretty repetitive

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WIPs / Re: Progressive/chill track "Ohm" for an EP
« on: September 27, 2016, 03:51:21 am »
The part right before the drop when you open up the saws/lift the cutoff filter and then the song drops its way too sudden and sounds somewhat like you're going to build up to the actual drop I'd say maybe have a fill or a break or something before the drop comes in so that it flows better... Other than that it sounds fine musically, its a smooth piece it just needs some fine tuning, good job :)

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