Here is my remix of Mako - Smoke Filled Room. What does everyone think of this? Just an idea so far, needs mixing and mastering. Don't be afraid to be honest (but not rude please )

Also, does the vocal fit with the remix? I cant tell if its in key with the track or not for some reason.
https://soundcloud.com/danmikasmusic/smoke-filled-room-wip/s-Mi4nz

Thanks!;D
- Dan Mikas

Overall the ideas are solid. the lead synth at the drop is a bit stale, but it works well. Is it made in serum?