this is so gooood

I really appreciate the feedback!

i looove this one. percussion is really good

not bad, although it could use more sub. mix sounds very low, kick isn't really standing out and snare seems to be very wide. to improve on your next song, add some sub, high cut around 120-130khz. another important thing is making sure everything in the mix has its own place so it can stand out. that involves kicks, snares, leads, etc. make sure you low cut leads, chords, and the bass so that the sub and kick have its own room in the low end part of the mix. then boost the highs if necessary. i like the track and how it starts off, and feel like the lead and the overall chord progression is nice & i feel like you can improve heavily if you continue to make music. good luck

Great advice, I really appreciate it.

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I really like it! Would be great with a vocal

Drop was fantastic, but the vocals felt labored. If that's you singing, I would try doing a more speak less breathy take and layer it quietly over top to make it more understandable. Still, good job

Thanks for the tips! That isn't me singing, the vocals are from Mako - Smoke Filled Room.

So far it's pretty good. I would suggest adding some chord layers to the break, to add so depth to the song as a whole, and rely a little less on the stems. In the drops, I would add some sort of arp or background noise to fill in the gaps between the bass sounds.

Other than that, just add some sub bass. great potential so far!