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WIPs / [EDM] Hey Mama Remix
« on: June 18, 2016, 07:55:07 pm »
Very much WIP. I need a lot of feedback at this stage.
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WIPs / Re: [EDM] Iron Heart
« on: June 16, 2016, 06:24:29 pm »Quote
Add more depth through the frequency range by expanding the highs and including more transitions!Thanks for the tip, but that's too much jargon in one sentence.
Can I have a translation please?
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WIPs / [EDM] Iron Heart
« on: June 12, 2016, 07:47:43 pm »
Hearts of Iron 4 is out.
It inspired me to fart a new track.
What do you think?
Edit:
Second iteration.
Edit:
Release.
It inspired me to fart a new track.
What do you think?
Edit:
Second iteration.
Edit:
Release.
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WIPs / Re: [Trance] Been a while for me...
« on: June 12, 2016, 08:40:47 am »
The intro has a nice atmosphere. I like the sound of it.
In the middle of the intro - I feel something is missing. Maybe add an arpeggio?
All in all, sounds great! It has a lot of potential to get on my daily playlist
In the middle of the intro - I feel something is missing. Maybe add an arpeggio?
All in all, sounds great! It has a lot of potential to get on my daily playlist
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WIPs / Weird stuff I made in a dare
« on: June 12, 2016, 08:38:09 am »
Hi.
So I recorded myself singing. I messed up, and ended up saying "blargh" in frustration.
I liked how it sounded like, so I saved it.
Then a friend heard it, and dared me to make an actual track out of it.
I made two.
This is probably my laziest production.
I'm curious as of what you might think or say.
Don't be afraid to give feedback - I know it's technically poop anyway ;D
So I recorded myself singing. I messed up, and ended up saying "blargh" in frustration.
I liked how it sounded like, so I saved it.
Then a friend heard it, and dared me to make an actual track out of it.
I made two.
This is probably my laziest production.
I'm curious as of what you might think or say.
Don't be afraid to give feedback - I know it's technically poop anyway ;D
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Finished Tracks / Ginzburg | Something like Bigroom / House
« on: May 20, 2016, 03:59:01 pm »
Will be happy to hear any and all feedback!
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R&A Graveyard / Commenting on specific times in a soundcloud
« on: April 30, 2016, 03:05:56 pm »
Hi.
The idea:
Easy & convenient way to express time & comment pairs.
For example:
But instead of me spending a lot of time creating a table, simplify the process with some new tags.
Also, could be awesome if clicking on the time would send you to that time in the track.
It can be very convenient to give feedback on people's work this way.
For example.
The idea:
Easy & convenient way to express time & comment pairs.
For example:
Quote
* Track is for demonstration purposes only
Time Comment 00:00-00:15 - Intro 00:15 - Beat comes in 00:43 - Beat comes out 01:07 - Drop
But instead of me spending a lot of time creating a table, simplify the process with some new tags.
Also, could be awesome if clicking on the time would send you to that time in the track.
It can be very convenient to give feedback on people's work this way.
For example.
Code: [Select]
[comments on=https://soundcloud.com/mixfeed/alok-sevenn-byob]
[comment at="00:00-00:15"]Intro[/comment]
[comment at="00:15"]Beat comes in[/comment]
[comment at="00:43"]Beat comes out[/comment]
[comment at="01:07"]Drop[/comment]
[/comments]As opposed toCode: [Select]
[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/mixfeed/alok-sevenn-byob[/soundcloud]
[table]
[tr][td]Time[/td]
[td]Comment[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][url]00:00-00:15[/url][/td][td]- Intro[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][url]00:15[/url][/td][td]- Beat comes in[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][url]00:43[/url][/td][td]- Beat comes out[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][url]01:07[/url][/td][td]- Drop[/td][/tr]
[/table]
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Finished Tracks / Re: New Track :) could use some feedback for improvement
« on: April 30, 2016, 02:44:22 pm »
Hi! One and a half month you say?
For a beginner, you sound great! I remember how my music sounded when I just started. (Hint: Laughable.)
As for the negatives, a set of points:
0:07 - Bass is in unison with the lead. Makes it sound boring. Try harmonizing.
0:16 - Vocals are clipped. Is the distortion intentional?
Also, the bassline is doing it's own thing. Sounds like it shouldn't be there.
Try something else. Something that would compliment the singing.
1:01 - I like the buildup. Sounds like something epic is going to happen.
1:16 - ... what? Sounds half-assed. Spend more time on it, and it can be great.
Also, try bringing out the kick more. It's swallowed by all the rest. Tip: Use EQ to bring out the low frequencies.
1:47 - Piano is distorted.
Other than that, you're doing good!
Keep up the hard work.
For a beginner, you sound great! I remember how my music sounded when I just started. (Hint: Laughable.)
As for the negatives, a set of points:
0:07 - Bass is in unison with the lead. Makes it sound boring. Try harmonizing.
0:16 - Vocals are clipped. Is the distortion intentional?
Also, the bassline is doing it's own thing. Sounds like it shouldn't be there.
Try something else. Something that would compliment the singing.
1:01 - I like the buildup. Sounds like something epic is going to happen.
1:16 - ... what? Sounds half-assed. Spend more time on it, and it can be great.
Also, try bringing out the kick more. It's swallowed by all the rest. Tip: Use EQ to bring out the low frequencies.
1:47 - Piano is distorted.
Other than that, you're doing good!
Keep up the hard work.
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WIPs / Ginzburg | Bigroom? Probably just house
« on: April 29, 2016, 01:26:34 pm »
Still being composed & arranged. Not mixed yet.
Let's hear some feedback. ;D
Let's hear some feedback. ;D
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Finished Tracks / Re: Progressive Track
« on: April 29, 2016, 12:06:56 pm »
WIP = Work In Progress.
In the beginning, there was atmosphere. Good stuff!
Personally, I like how the bass is offbeat. Reminds me a bit of x-files actually.
At 1:20 I got a bit bored. And then it repeated again.
And again.
2:15 - I expected something more. The buildup is good, but the drop doesn't release it enough. And oh good, it repeats! Reminds me of this.
In the beginning, there was atmosphere. Good stuff!
Personally, I like how the bass is offbeat. Reminds me a bit of x-files actually.
At 1:20 I got a bit bored. And then it repeated again.
And again.
2:15 - I expected something more. The buildup is good, but the drop doesn't release it enough. And oh good, it repeats! Reminds me of this.
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Finished Tracks / Re: (House) Adeaven - Static
« on: April 29, 2016, 12:02:10 pm »
0:19 - I expected more punch from the kick, and way more bass.
0:38 - I take it back. Good stuff!
The bass is a bit repetitive for my taste. Maybe try chopping it a bit?
1:17 - Aaah, my ears! Distortion.
1:36 - Wait, I just heard that? IMHO not enough buildup.
About the way you decided to end it - Sounds like it should continue. If it's a demo cut, it's fine. If that's how you ship then something's missing.
But overall, it's not heavy on my ears. It sounds good!
0:38 - I take it back. Good stuff!
The bass is a bit repetitive for my taste. Maybe try chopping it a bit?
1:17 - Aaah, my ears! Distortion.
1:36 - Wait, I just heard that? IMHO not enough buildup.
About the way you decided to end it - Sounds like it should continue. If it's a demo cut, it's fine. If that's how you ship then something's missing.
But overall, it's not heavy on my ears. It sounds good!
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WIPs / Re: Track I've been working on
« on: April 29, 2016, 11:40:26 am »
It's a very chill piece. I like it.
The melody is catchy, but nothing hooks me in.
It's great as background.
The melody is catchy, but nothing hooks me in.
It's great as background.
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WIPs / Re: Blues EDM WIP
« on: April 29, 2016, 11:00:14 am »
Immediately raises a smile to my face.
I like it.
The drums are a bit too low on volume for my taste, but overall it sounds great!
Reminds me a bit of Overwerk:
(drop is at 1:05)
I like it.
The drums are a bit too low on volume for my taste, but overall it sounds great!
Reminds me a bit of Overwerk:
(drop is at 1:05)
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Finished Tracks / Vegas | I don't even know.
« on: April 28, 2016, 04:12:41 pm »
Loosely inspired by this:
Gadi Dahan & Omri Mordehai - Monkey Banana
If you don't see the connection, then I don't blame you. Such is artistic inspiration.
Also, don't think too hard about the name. You'll hurt yourself.
Don't be shy. I can take criticism.
Also, I have no idea what genre this is. Any help is welcome.
Gadi Dahan & Omri Mordehai - Monkey Banana
If you don't see the connection, then I don't blame you. Such is artistic inspiration.
Also, don't think too hard about the name. You'll hurt yourself.
Don't be shy. I can take criticism.
Also, I have no idea what genre this is. Any help is welcome.
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