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Finished Tracks / Nord | House
« on: April 29, 2017, 09:35:05 am »I'd love to have some feedback.
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I'd love to have some feedback.
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Finished Tracks / Eleven [EDM]
« on: November 26, 2016, 07:18:19 pm »Trying out things in the new Fruity Loops.
How's that?
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Finished Tracks / mau5 cheese [House/EDM]
« on: November 26, 2016, 06:35:54 pm »I went for a more minimal / deadmau5 aesthetic.
Did I nail it?
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Finished Tracks / Re: Rusty Schlitz - I Don't Want To Know (Original Mix)
« on: August 20, 2016, 09:29:02 pm »
From the start - OK, sounds a bit retro / house.
One minute it - it's repetitive.
Two minutes in - I started skipping around. Yep, more of the same.
From a composing point of view:
Try to not repeat the same thing more than 4 times in a row. Change things up, try to progress.
It's even better if you repeat only 3, and the 4th is a transition.
From a mixing point of view: Sounds like no mixing at all. Some basses should be boosted, some highs should be too. Add depth using stereo, and fix the volumes.
From a mastering point of view: None was done. The track is quiet, and you can clearly see & hear the difference in volume between the meat (vocals & synths & bass) and the bones (beat, drums).
Sounds like a beginning - much more work is required.
One minute it - it's repetitive.
Two minutes in - I started skipping around. Yep, more of the same.
From a composing point of view:
Try to not repeat the same thing more than 4 times in a row. Change things up, try to progress.
It's even better if you repeat only 3, and the 4th is a transition.
From a mixing point of view: Sounds like no mixing at all. Some basses should be boosted, some highs should be too. Add depth using stereo, and fix the volumes.
From a mastering point of view: None was done. The track is quiet, and you can clearly see & hear the difference in volume between the meat (vocals & synths & bass) and the bones (beat, drums).
Sounds like a beginning - much more work is required.
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WIPs / Re: I've been working on this music, and i want to know, what u guys think about?
« on: August 20, 2016, 09:22:38 pm »
The instruments are well chosen.
From a composition point of view, it's good.
From a mixing point of view - You can give some of your instruments a bit more depth. You'll be surprised by how much impact stereo separation has.
Mastering wise - you're not participating in the loudness war.
From a composition point of view, it's good.
From a mixing point of view - You can give some of your instruments a bit more depth. You'll be surprised by how much impact stereo separation has.
Mastering wise - you're not participating in the loudness war.
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WIPs / Re: Finishing up an old tune of mine.
« on: August 20, 2016, 09:18:28 pm »
Woah!
Made my bob my head.
The middle-eastern scale gives it good uniqueness.
Great work with the rhythm.
Really, can't find anything that I dislike about this.
Made my bob my head.
The middle-eastern scale gives it good uniqueness.
Great work with the rhythm.
Really, can't find anything that I dislike about this.
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WIPs / Re: Progressive Trance WIP
« on: August 20, 2016, 09:13:40 pm »
Really like the intro!
The muffled plucks with delay got me.
0:45 (drop) - Really missing bass. I can hardly hear the kick.
But the synth sounds great!
Outro sounds like copypasted intro
I can't wait until you do more work on this!
The muffled plucks with delay got me.
0:45 (drop) - Really missing bass. I can hardly hear the kick.
But the synth sounds great!
Outro sounds like copypasted intro
I can't wait until you do more work on this!
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Finished Tracks / Re: [EDM] Iron Heart
« on: July 15, 2016, 01:49:00 pm »
Here's a remastered version.
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