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Finished Tracks / AUTUMN ANTHEM | electro-orchestral good vibes :) will return all feedback
« on: March 26, 2016, 01:02:29 am »
First song in a while, please tell me what you think :)
I will gladly return feedback in exchange for some constructive criticism.

~NewPatrol



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WIPs / Re: Vera - Pure | Opinions wanted :)
« on: March 25, 2016, 09:36:51 pm »
The beginning was gorgeous, I'd capitalize on that, however, I'm also a huge fan of the piano melodies near the end. They're fresh and innovative. Kinda keep you guessing a little. The chords below them however, are a little boomy, and somewhat drawn out, so maybe cut them down a little, and reduce some of the detunation. Good listen :)

~NewPatrol

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WIPs / Come as You Are - electro-orchestral remix - WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK
« on: March 25, 2016, 09:27:56 pm »
Desperately need some help or inspiration completing this. I like the way it sounds but I can't figure out
how to drop it without losing the flow and keeping it interesting and engaging. I'd be incredibly grateful
if some of you shot me your opinions :) Plus I'll gladly check out your tracks if you respond ;)


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WIPs / Re: KLANG | Don't Look Back | Very Emotional New Song
« on: March 25, 2016, 09:20:58 pm »
Really, just pleasant to listen to. It's been said before but the piano notes could be softened up a little.
They have a tinny quality that's a little abrasive when compared to the rest of this very emotional piece. Fantastic work!

~NewPatrol

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WIPs / Re: What do you think of this??
« on: March 25, 2016, 09:18:07 pm »
I like the subtle detuned sound of the lead. Also you manage to use the melbourne bounce vibe without getting monotonous, which is impressive. The track might benefit from a little bit of empty space during the drop, just so that the wall of sound that is your bass and lead doesn't start sounding dry. Just give it a little more variety :)

~NewPatrol

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WIPs / Re: Video game pop WIP, any comments/criticism welcome! :)
« on: March 25, 2016, 09:14:33 pm »
Brilliant, cheerful, light and fun. If I had to give a piece of feedback? Maybe throw in a little high end, because the low seems a tad exaggerated. Otherwise a really great listen :) You have a new follower.

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