This is the latest one i'm working in progress.

I dig this track a lot but I feel like the high end keeps fighting each other, especially the reverb tails. Also, I personally want more of that synth/choppy thing after the sweep/drop because that sounds dope af!

Thanks..   I stopped that synth/choppy part You mentioned . I think this part is hardest.
Synth is always problem,, I guess
btw what's mean the high-end keeps fighting..? what part did you mean..?   (If you see this comment , again.. )

Anyways, Thank you so much for you comment   Have a great day, there !

This was a really cool track, I liked it!  As a basshead I am really digging your monster sub bass lines, good work!

I think that this track could benefit from some some additional groove, specifically by adding some more drums such as hi-hats or other percussion sounds in there to create some additional movement. 

If you haven't heard of his music before, Snails has quite a lot of groove and drums going on in his tracks, which may be helpful for a reference.  You may be going for a different sound/style than that, though still hope it helps.

Looking forward to hearing more of your work in the future! 

I'm about to post one of my own songs for feedback, would really love to get some from a fellow basshead if you are interested!

Thank you so much for your comment.
and thanks for listening my track in good way. 
I think i have seen the artist name "Snails" while listen to sound cloud, a few times.  but couldnt listen to him carefully, i guess
I'm gonna listen carefully to his track. I guess it will be very helpful for next step Thank you very much for recommendation. 
I hope you Have a great day, there.
and Thanks for your comment.. again!  

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I feel like i need a shower after listening to that (cause it was so dirty.) Only thing i'd suggest (since i'm not a huge trap guy) is a break in the sub during the drops

If you don't give a constructive advice or criticism to producers of bass music such as dubstep, trap, or hiphop and else

don't listen to those again and talk to them what you think.

Uh, I think he meant it in a good way...

I can't find him trying to say for a feedback or advice on that comment.
(no need to be lengthy. ) 
just seems like  I hate trap.
( not like wobble sounds bad, or kick is not fit on it.)


I wonder how many times should he get shower when he go to clubs or something else palying trap or bass music.. ?

If he felt that  only on this track and meant it , I would take that criticism with non constructive.

thanks, anyways.

LMAOOOO oh my god im deadddddd

Heyyy!!  LOL.

yeah this kinda would be  so silly..and ridiculous ..
I was like at morning right after wake-up and checking feedback from this site..
and im not actually english user.. so kinda had confused... !!
yeah laugh at me..

I think this is nice.

I like this mood. it would be great, if it's little more lengthy.

thank you very much for your earnest comment.

I feel same that the drop of intro quite awkward.

Thanks for point out.

and your track is nice , i think,  such a well made track.  feel stable and smooth at mixing, 



Thank you very much again.  have a great day there !

well made.

"Dirty" is a good thing to be if you make trap, it's not an insult.

Oh my..
I get it now what he meant..
sorry for misunderstanding.