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I agree with the reply above, the drop kinda just comes out of nowhere . Also are you using reverb on kickdrum ?
i think u should bring the bass later maybe. u could smash out something over 2 mins easily man i like where this ones at. the synths r kinda cool, but its not something thats too pleasing for me to listen to for awhile. maybe even take those out at the drop or simplify them to make that bass as isolated as possible. i dig it
This is really interesting. It's like, juke almost. But doesn't have that vibe exactly. I like the space you leave in between the phrases. And the percussion choice is good. But I agree with KLANG that everything is panned left for some reason. Not sure why. But I would just check your master or something. And again, I agree with KLANG on layering. It would help fill the song out a bit.
Keep up the work, dude. I think you definitely have the skill to make things way beyond this. Your taste in sounds and groove is solid.
Definitely cool start. Something I noticed right away is that there's more going on in the left channel than the right. Everything feels tilted to the left side.
My biggest piece of advice would be work on layering sounds. Layer everything. Make stuff more interesting. Bigger, louder, more dynamic. It is definitely good stuff so far! keep it up
I like the rhythms throughout the song, although I’m a bit biased because I like Jersey Club and those types of genres.
Overall I think there should be more melodic ideas throughout the song, or, with the ones you have already, make them more prominent to juxtapose the parts where the focus isn’t on the melody, but the rhythm and bass. You have some melodies throughout the song, but they don’t seem to stand out as much as they could.
(Keep in mind, I tend to like more melodic types of music, so once again that’s where my critiques come from.)
Last thing would be the ending, it ends pretty abruptly, you might want to consider making a longer outro.
Just my opinions, take it or leave it. Good initial ideas though!
[cloudset]
I'm unskilled yet. but what would you do If you were at my level...?
Well i guess i would practice and do music whenever i had free time . The song itself, well for me it just sounds like random sound just put together theres nothing a listener could really catch on if you get the point lol . Mixdown needs a work too but that will come with time and practice. Good luck !
