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WIPs / Kawaii bass song with memes.
« on: April 05, 2017, 09:09:36 pm »


would be great , if you leave what you think...

thanks.

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WIPs / Re: Trap with oriental vibes
« on: March 21, 2017, 08:21:41 am »

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WIPs / Trap with oriental vibes
« on: March 18, 2017, 05:21:04 pm »


Would be great if you tell me what you think or some feedbacks.

Thanks !!

:)

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WIPs / Starboy by the weekend Remix ( Future pop style )
« on: January 25, 2017, 03:42:38 pm »


I remixed star boy  recently.

would be great , if you tell me what you think.

:)


 

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WIPs / Re: Gorillaz - Feel Good inc. remix
« on: December 23, 2016, 09:34:04 am »
this is one of my all time fave songs!!

i think the main thing holding this back is a lack of dynamics. the verses are all pretty loud, and the "drop" (the De La Soul verses). i would consider using a softer kick & 808, or just turning them down, during the verses. that way the drop hits harder. and also the mid-range frequencies feel kinda muddy in the chorus (0:18 ish), you might want to give those some attention. high passing the vocals a little bit and checking the relationship of the bass to the pads may help.

anyway i like what you did with the vocals & chords though, excited to see how it turns out!!


Thank you very much.

for ur detailed comment.

I realized, perhaps 

there are so many things i missed. 

Thank you so much ur comment again.

Have a great day there :)
 

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WIPs / Re: Gorillaz - Feel Good inc. remix
« on: December 23, 2016, 09:28:03 am »
I love the vibe of this track. I would say in the beginning it feels a tiny bit out of time. This is especially when those ha ha's come in. So I would go through the vocals and make sure they are always in time.

Thanks for ur comment. :)

it is good chance to consider my track again

Thanks. :)

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WIPs / Gorillaz - Feel Good inc. remix
« on: December 20, 2016, 08:31:39 am »

been a long time to be here.

I remixed Gorillaz track recently.

would be great if you tell me what you think.


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WIPs / chill / bass / rnb
« on: October 15, 2016, 09:33:23 am »

made a track with chill vibes.

would be great if you tell me what you think.

thanks :)


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WIPs / Re: bass /underground /hiphop /trap
« on: October 05, 2016, 06:08:13 pm »
The sound design on this is interesting but the sounds you used aren't mixed very well... Some of the sounds you used are really fucking loud and that sound you have in the beginning is quiet in comparison and the vocal thing you have in the background throughout the drops is pretty repetitive


thanks  for the comment.

btw  i re-uploaded , anyways.

Thanks for ur pointing out again. 

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WIPs / bass /underground /hiphop /trap
« on: September 29, 2016, 04:01:03 pm »


It would be great If you tell me what you think...

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WIPs / Nu Disco chill track.
« on: August 20, 2016, 03:24:54 pm »


This is a track i have worked, Currently.

Would be thankful,  If you tell me what you think.

:)

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WIPs / Re: orchestral Future sound. feed back plz !
« on: August 08, 2016, 06:51:31 am »
Right off the bat, it sounds undermixed/mastered, like everything could be brought out more than they are.
The vocals definitely don't fit with some of the chords too, like at 0:27 for example, like ZUDDOX said.

One thing I definitely noticed too at 0:50 - the vibe and percussion is working really well with the vocals, but there's hardly any low end to back any of this up. I would add a sub bass, and a low pad to help give the track more energy.

Some things that are good though:
    - The gated synths are really nice, and I like the kick work.
    - The cymbals sound really nice, as well as the timpani rolls.
    - The piano at 3:09 is LOVELY. Would love to hear more of that!
    - Actually, all of the percussion is pretty awesome. I'm not huge on the snare samples you used, but that's just more personal preference than anything.

But yeah I would say the main things would be to mix and master this track to bring out the dynamics more, work on matching the vocal pitches with your chords underneath, and add some low end and low/mid.



Yeah.  Thanks to feedback , I reuploaded track. after some fixing.

Thank you so much for your opinion.

Really helps :)

Thank you for letting me know !



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WIPs / Re: orchestral Future sound. feed back plz !
« on: August 08, 2016, 06:48:46 am »
The mix is really uneven. It suddenly gets loud at certain points in the song, are you using a limiter on your master channel? Lovely voice, some parts are off-key, just use a pitch correction plugin. Reminds me of Grimes little bit, not really my kind of music but interesting!


Thank you for honest feedback.

It really helps !

Thank you so much :)

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WIPs / Re: I made underground hiphop , trap, bass
« on: July 31, 2016, 09:24:07 am »
Love all the elements at the beginning, and they come together nicely at 0:17. However, the bass is way too wide. Stereoization with bass is almost never a good idea, you can achieve a much harder and intense effect by keeping the bass mono and in the middle of the mix.

That being said though, the vibe of this track does go really hard. I like the pulsing lead accompanied with the percussion, and the samples throughout add good layering and variation. Really liked the "Panda" sample too, would've loved to hear more of that.

I would like to hear some more processing in the different elements such as more reverb, EQing, filters, etc., but like I said the vibe is perfect for what you're going for.


Thank you very much,

your comment will help me for the next work.

I Really appreciate that :)


Thank you.


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WIPs / orchestral Future sound. feed back plz !
« on: July 28, 2016, 06:58:35 pm »

Can you tell me what you think ?

or any part i should touch again,

Thanks!!

 

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