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WIPs / Future Trap/Bass hybrid. Need thoughts and feedback!
« on: January 12, 2016, 07:06:17 pm »
First time with this kind of music, it seems to be going alright, and I would love to make this one good!  I would love to hear what you think!  Mix feedback is especially welcome.

I also just noticed the sub overlap/distortion in the first drop.

https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/never/s-2NByS

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WIPs / Re: FVTVRE BVSS | worked on it a bit more, updated the link
« on: January 12, 2016, 01:55:47 am »
I like how this is sounding.  The snare is really sweet, a very nice donk.  I think it would sound really sick to reinforce the drops with some beefy supersaw/futuresaw chords, and then throw in some movement changes/tremolo variations!
Keep it up.

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WIPs / Re: Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« on: January 11, 2016, 05:50:04 pm »
Thanks man, that's some great feedback!  The tambourine-ish sound as in the main ride movement thing that comes in with the first beat?
Agreed

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WIPs / Re: Electro house
« on: January 11, 2016, 06:56:50 am »
Enjoying it so far, I agree with what was said about filling up some space with reverb and what not.  Maybe add some percussion or other drum elements, with electro house it could be sick to add glitch breaks and stuff along those lines! :D
good work otherwise. 

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WIPs / Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« on: January 11, 2016, 06:42:35 am »
https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/deja-vu/s-1s93U

Let me know what should change!  Mix especially!  I will be adding much more as far as phrasing and many additional elements...

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WIPs / Vibe-House Collaboration track
« on: January 09, 2016, 11:04:51 pm »
https://clyp.it/vcn5mr3u

This is my first time really making half-decent house music.  It has a really "melodic" or airy feel to it. 
Let me know what I should fix or consider to change!
Thank you

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WIPs / Re: Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« on: January 07, 2016, 06:01:02 pm »
The other feedback was good.  Overall great feel to the track.
I think the lower parts of the chords could progress/change/descend more on the first major synth hit, maybe after 2 bars.  It feels very static/non-moving for how uplifting it is.  Nice work overall

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Finished Tracks / Re: GTA - Red Lips Remix
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:56:50 pm »
Huge fan of the second drop.  Nice mixdown as far as I can tell with earbuds. 
the first drop is cool but I think it should change more halfway through, in composition or sound design.
Really love the snare you have goin on too!
cheers!

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Finished Tracks / Re: Hailstorm | I tried to be tennyson
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:52:01 pm »
Drainpuppet!  Glad to see you on here.  Love Climb!!
Im a huge fan of Tennyson as well.  I think you took inspiration well and applied your own style well.  I think the general progression got a little stale because it's so simple and stays the same for so long.  I would recommend looking into jazz and blues chords and change it up with rhythmic sequence changes perhaps.  Love those fills, and the mixdown is sick as always. 

It doesnt speak Jazz to me, but overall great work.  :)


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WIPs / Re: Future Bass WIP/Idea
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:47:22 pm »
Not bad at all.  Decent mixdown!  Could use a little fatter sub bass, and it's a little generic.  I would bring in some more interesting synths and drum samples, change it up a bit.  Maybe some break arps in between synth chord hits or something.
Nice work so far.  Really love the final chorus :)

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WIPs / Re: I made Neuro like its 2012
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:45:46 pm »
Quote from: myda on January 07, 2016, 01:45:18 pm
it sounds so good dude. this is super nitpicky but I really don't like the reverby snap that you used throughout the track. maybe once or twice, but I think a little variation in that would be a lot better(imo). also I think more atmosphere woult do this song some good. other than that though this is really solid! nice work man

I would agree to a point,  I like the timbre, I think it would be better as a shorter decay snap. 
I also find the 8 bit fast arp in the middle to be a little boring because it stays the same.  That being said you're an amazing producer and love this track a bunch, great work again Kidswaste. 

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WIPs / Re: Weird trap thing of some sort
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:35:22 pm »
Once again killing it soupandreas. 
Love the E-piano jazz solos in between.  Might be sick to automate some high frequency changes on the synth swells to give them movement and sparkle, but just an idea :)
great work again.

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WIPs / Re: Kind of future
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:27:06 pm »
Really enjoy the composition.  The drop seems a little ambiguous and certain elements like the first set of wobble chords seem slightly out of place.  I think the mixdown could use work.  in the intro it would be sweet to bring in a cleaner, mid-low square-ish pluck to contrast all the airy saws.  Overall it seems to focus on brightness which is good, but the kick is a lil weak and it could use some more sub and just bass.  Nice feel to it, excited to hear the outcome.
Cheers!

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WIPs / Re: Song in progress : Flight
« on: January 06, 2016, 08:11:56 pm »
Quote from: soupandreas on January 06, 2016, 05:49:22 am
first thing that i noticed is that the kick is pretty messy. go with a simpler synth kick, like a short 808. i think your structure is pretty good as it is. it flows well and sounds good chronologically, so i think you're doing pretty well on that front.

if you're not already, try bussing your chords and bass together and sidechaining the bus to the kick drum. for future bassy stuff you probably wanna mix around the kick and snare, so solo those two, set them at a fixed level and bring in your other tracks one by one in order of importance. that should get your levels in a pretty good order.

Could not have asked for better feedback and hardly from anyone else but you!  you're a huge inspiration to me man :)

Thanks a ton. I agree with all of that.  I already have my synths and basses bussed, and I do that exact thing but in this one I overcompensated and made the sidechain too weak because I have been critiqued for having too extreme of a sidechain.  Im excited to keep working on the tune.  Thanks for the advice Andreas :D

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WIPs / Song in progress : Flight
« on: January 06, 2016, 05:39:59 am »
https://clyp.it/zwikrjil

let me know what you think, critique would be great, especially problems with mixdown, flow, ideas. 

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