Thanks a ton guys! will definitely consider the feedback! appreciate it so much

Hey guys,

This is starting to feel like one of my best tracks but I would love input to make it as strong as possible!  thanks so much <3

https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/in-between-demo/s-IK8dd

UPDATED LINK https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/lungs-demo/s-gdVmc

Hey folks,

working hard on this energetic Marshmellow and Wheathin inspired track.  I would adore feedback of any kind!

https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/lungs-demo/s-gdVmc

Thank you
<3

Really like the FX used at the beginning. Alongside the subtle synths, it sounds really nice. Absolutely gorgeous snap/clap sample used as well, and mixed very well. Sounds perfect in the mix.

Boy, the mixing on this is super solid. The kick has some nice hat work paired with it to bring out the high ends, the vocal chops are really well done with solid reverb, and there are just enough breaks to keep the beat moving, yet not too many to where it breaks the vibe.

At 1:54/1:55, the sound is so crisp it's unreal. Absolutely spot on mixing and mastering. I'm honestly not the biggest fan of the DnB percussion that begins underneath here, but it's subtle enough to where it doesn't make too much of an impact.

The synth that starts up at 2:45 I think could use some sidechaining to give it a little bit more bounce to go along with the other elements.

Incredible track though man, I'd say this one's about as close to done as it can be! You should toss me the link to the finished track when it's all done, I'd love to hear it!

Some wonderful feedback, I will definitely look into that sidechaining!  Thank you so much!    As for the "Amen Break" drums buildup Im still on the fence about it, very good to hear your opinion on it! 

Again thank you!  looking forward to completing this.

Pleasantly surprised, lots of great elements here, the backing chords are original and well mixed from what I can tell.  I think after you throw a master on it with proper multiband compression and maybe an exciter element, and mess with stereo seperation/imaging a little more, this will sound huge.  Kick could use a little more in the 80-100 HZ area I think, and maybe less mid in them?  ALSO the big chords coming in halfway through the tune are WAY too loud in comparison.  I totally get you want that to be huge but they highs are overwhelming at least, maybe just some softer compression there or balancing it out with automation of EQ throughout the whole song.  If the actual drops were that big in the waveform and fit in a nice mix then I would be blown away. 

Overall great work dude.  Keep at it!

You've captured the style very well. I like it. A note:

- The kick needed some work. Starting at 0:39, the kick really stuck out. I don't think the kick you used suits the style. It should sound "deeper", as in, a little more going for it in the bass area (ex: Direct - Tranquility starting at 0:54. I couldn't find a more relevant example) like that. Then in the second drop (I'm just going to call it that) I was straining to hear the kick at all.

Roughly speaking, well done thus far. Nothing jumped out at me in a bad way except for the kick.

-Annie

Thanks a ton!
I definitely agree. I like the kick itself but not with the style especially now that you mention it...