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Finished Tracks / Re: Witching Hour (XXYYXX REMIX) | Goodtimesociety
« on: February 21, 2016, 01:39:49 pm »
love the LFO's, overall feel of the track is great. totally agree with Klang on the reverb tails. you wouldn't need much either, just a little reverb with a moderate decay time (maybe like, 2.5 sec just to ballpark a number) and it should give you the perfect depth and space on it :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Jujunga - On Top // Future Bass
« on: February 20, 2016, 03:27:20 pm »
this is oddly specific, but the reverb on your claps sounds pristine. Really adds a nice shine to the track as a whole. This is really good :) :)

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WIPs / Re: Cute ass WIP
« on: February 17, 2016, 08:22:47 pm »
this feels great already, I'd be excited to hear the vocals you mentioned though! Those could really bring the track up to it's full potential :)

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WIPs / Re: i'm making this song out of a sample from my 3DS lol
« on: February 17, 2016, 01:53:22 pm »
Gorgeous atmosphere. My only criticisms are on the middle section:

- timing in the lead instrument sounds off, especially in the beginning
- that same instrument is also a bit dull sound-wise, maybe it needs more highs just to stand out as a solo instrument. And to me it sounds like it should be panned to the left for balance.
- clap sounds out of place with no reverb on it

this is great advice, thanks so much for listening and for the feedback! The middle section is pretty weak in my opinion too, I'm glad that now I have some solid things to address from someone else's perspective.

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WIPs / Re: i'm making this song out of a sample from my 3DS lol
« on: February 17, 2016, 01:11:15 am »
hey man the link you posted is broken! I think you forgot to use the private link!

lolol i'm literally so dumb

both links should work now, thanks for telling me :)

https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/flora-masterfinal/s-hl8YF

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WIPs / i'm making this song out of a sample from my 3DS lol
« on: February 16, 2016, 11:08:40 pm »
hi guys :) i have this WIP here that i think has potential, but i feel like it's missing something. maybe it needs a tighter mix (well it definitely needs that), maybe i need to add something a bit more tangible to the progression, i'm not exactly sure.

would love and appreciate it if you guys were to give me some feedback on what you think and what could improve the track as a whole.

thanks so much!

https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/flora-masterfinal/s-hl8YF

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Mixing/Mastering / Re: Mixing resonant percussion into your track
« on: February 13, 2016, 03:24:04 pm »
^ this is great advice, super super helpful! Thanks so much!

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You Might Like... / Re: Tennyson - Like What EP
« on: February 13, 2016, 01:21:08 pm »
the track, "Like What" is the single most impressive piece of music to ever come out of electronic music imo

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City Lights isn't my favourite thing on your page but these dudes are right. Your tunes are well good.

Also ever so slightly OT but you have the most fabulous hair. What product are you using?

thanks for listening! I know this remix isn't going to be up everyone's alley, but I really appreciate you taking the time to listen to my stuff :)

and a little off topic but thanks haha
i'm not fancy, it's just generic fantastic sams stuff lol

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Mixing/Mastering / Re: Mixing resonant percussion into your track
« on: February 12, 2016, 07:32:12 pm »
following the "use your ears not your eyes" logic, I would rather hear a clip than see a screenshot. I think if it's not sitting properly in the mix, it's more likely to be an arrangement issue. maybe it's either too quiet or loud, or needs to be pushed further into the background with reverb, lopassing, or compression, or maybe it's just competing too much with the other sounds.

fair :)

here's a clip - the specific percussion I'm talking about are the bells and tambourine hits at the beginning of each 4 bar loop (the hit on the offbeats of the first measure)

https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/wip-clip-poet-and-i-didnt-even-know-it

I actually think they sound pretty ok, I'm just wondering if I'm being over critical based on the spectrum

thanks :)

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Thanks so much for checking it out Kodeon :) I really appreciate it!

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Mixing/Mastering / Re: Mixing resonant percussion into your track
« on: February 12, 2016, 05:10:47 pm »
You could have a build up in the particular percussion's set of frequency with other elements in your track.

You also might need to remove that sample entirely.

I suggest you come back to it after a few days, when you get enough advice, and discern what actually needs to happen.

Would love to hear your end results and what you did to get the desired effect.

Yeah, I'm gonna give it a few days in order to come back and listen again with fresh ears :) thanks for the tip!

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Mixing/Mastering / Re: Mixing resonant percussion into your track
« on: February 12, 2016, 05:08:26 pm »
This might sound like I'm being an asshole so let me just say I don't intend it as such at all:

Use your ears not your eyes.

Sharp spikes at a particular frequency is the nature of resonance, so of course it will look that way on a visual frequency analyzer. But ignore the analyzer and listen, does it sound right? Does it feel like it's fitting in the mix? If yes, then it's fine. If no, then there is work to be done but base it on what you're hearing not what you're seeing.

IMO analyzers are great for a quick reference point for very broad strokes, but are next to useless when it comes to narrow bands within a particular mix.

All that said, maybe post a screenshot to show just how much of a spike we're talking about? Include an audio clip if we want to get really serious about it. Discussing audio is all fine and dandy but it's pretty futile without all hearing the same thing.


Don't worry, i don't mind the bluntness and honesty at all, it helps to get a better product, so I appreciate it!

Here's a screenshot of the analysis on the master bus. The frequencies in particular are in the 5K to 10K range.

http://imgur.com/OtTBVnL

Also, I agree with you on the fact that the sound will always be more important than any visual feedback, I'm just wondering if I'm creating any sonic issues with my mix that I can't pick out just by listening, whether that be due to my lack of good experience or the low quality, non-treated room that I have my stuff in :)

Thanks for the feedback!

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Mixing/Mastering / Mixing resonant percussion into your track
« on: February 12, 2016, 04:30:29 pm »
Hi guys :) so I have a quick question for anyone who is better and more knowledgable at advanced mixing than I am (which is probably a lot of people).

In a few different wips I start i often find myself being drawn to interesting percussion sounds like bells, tambourines, or more exotic sounding hits. the issue that I seem to be running into is that these types of elements seem to make my spectrum analysis become pretty rough looking. This happens even when I find the element to sit well in the mix and be cohesive with the rest of it all.

Just to give a bit more detail, the issue isn't resolved just by lowering the EQ at the specific frequency because the percussion loses it's flavor with that specific band. The resonance coming from that specific frequency range is what makes the sample interesting.

My question is, should these elements be mixed so that the spectrum looks smoother? Or should it not be too much of an issue if it pops out of the range a bit in a frequency band? I know the ultimate test if whether it sounds good or not, but I'm wondering if there's an issue that I can't pinpoint because my ears aren't trained well enough (I'm no pro at this).

Hopefully that wasn't too hard to follow. Thanks guys!

edit - here's a direct link to the wip I'm trying to mix: https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/wip-clip-poet-and-i-didnt-even-know-it

thanks :)

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Damn dude you have some talent. Your stuff is mad good  :) ;)

thanks for listening! i'm really glad you like it! :)

Getting Persona 4 vibes from this. Amazing work.

omg the BEST compliment ever <3 thank you!

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