Ummmm, I don't think so, really.  I think there maybe could have been a little more variation in the drop and the subsequent repeats of that wobble with the arp over it.  But I liked that a lot so I didn't mind so much.  The vocal editing was sweet in the middle there.  And I think you did right by keeping it minimal during the verses.  I did notice that things may not be all locked in and quantized.  Which could help things pop a little bit more.  Wasn't sure if it was the percussion or the vocal not lining up exactly on the downbeat at times.

But despite my little qualms, I really do think it's a great track and I can tell you put a lot of time into it.  Really nice work.  Gotta let me know when it's officially released, man.  Would love to pick it up.

So I really really don't want to spam with all my stuff, but just in case anyone wants a house remix of that classic bomberman hero tune, here you go.  Free download.

https://soundcloud.com/iamprodigal/bomberman-hero-mimesis-prodigal-remix

I know the mixdown needs work among other things, but I couldn't find all the samples and stems I had saved for this file.  Oh well.
Thank you all for the love on my other tunes.  I appreciate it so much.  I'm seriously so humbled.  Thank you all.

It's actually not a vocal sample at all. It's a Microbrute lead with a slow attack! That synth can get some strange sounds.

Thanks for the feedback!

Whoaaaaaa dude for real?  That's so weird.  I like its uniqueness a lot.  The panning and use of it is really cool.

I'll just say I agree with everything else already, as Its already been said!

The only thing ill say could bring this to the next level is maybe focus on longer, more complex chord progressions. If you can get the 'feels' factor in to the downtempo parts of the track, you'll be onto something really really special. Really look forward to more of your stuff dude!

P.S. that bass beat got me movin yo! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

dude for real this is killer

Dude. Guys. Thank you. This is unreal. I agree with you, scribit. I need to work on developing more interesting chord progressions. I realize my tunes are pretty dull in that department. Even the last couple wips I have all sound the same. Haha. I greatly appreciate the feedback. And I really liked yours and Icehunts tunes. Both of you guys have some great sound design. I've also been really impressed with everyone's mixdowns. Really quality tunes

Thanks guys. Peace.

Great idea for a topic. Most of the tracks i finish are progressive. I'm a creature of habit and I grew up on the OG deadmau5 remixes (from like 2006/7) and I'm a sucker for plucks. Onward!

Hahahaha I'm right there with you, dude.  That is exactly how I am.  The mau5 plucks were my draw to progressive house.  Still find myself reverting to them.

Thank you, Heymac.  Following you on soundcloud, dude.  Gotta sleep now, but I'll be checking out your stuff soon.  Cheers, dude.

Dude this is fantastic.  GOSH i'm loving this forum right now.  So many good tunes.  The key changes/chord changes are incredible.  The anticipation of each one just leads the change so well.  I love when it lands each time.  And your sounds are super clean.  Really nice work, dude.  I look forward to listening through more of your stuff.