So, I have got tinnitus in my right ear and its unusable for very long periods. So I use my left ear mostly for all the mixing and the mastering process. But now, even my left ear has also started deteriorating and both of my ears hurt badly even if I hear some music for about 30-45 minutes. I want to make so much music but my ears just won't let me. And now it has put me in such a dilemma as to what should I do ahead? I mean there's nothing more "dear" to me than making and listening to music. Its getting really very depressive. Help me people!!! 

I have been producing for quite some time now but I am not being able to bring the kick out very distinctly and bring some space to the mix. Everything sounds very hotchpotch and every element being one over the other. I have tried many of the mixing techniques. I have used sidechaining, subtractive eqing, cutting the lower frequencies on other leads and synths, increasing the important frequencies on the kick, etc. but without much accomplishment. I just can't seem to find what I'm doing wrong. Please help!!!

And also the bassline on my mix also seems to get lost when the I keep adding instruments on the chords and leads. What should I do about this???

Here's my WIP (I guess) if its not already finished.

I've been working on it for some days and now its taking some shape but I can't really figure out what it is lacking or where its going wrong.

I guess the starting is a little bad and volume levels on some elements are not as much as it should be. So, please suggest some techniques to make it a better song. 

P.S.: Please listen to the whole song

I have been producing for about 5-6 months now and the greatest problem that comes my way are the transitions of the song. They are either very bland or don't match-up with the next part. I create a melody (which is the main drop), and then get stuck with what i should do after, or before, the present part. And because of this I sometimes abandon the project out of frustration. Help me out friends!!!