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WIPs / Need some reviews on a lo-fi track
« on: February 14, 2019, 10:45:29 am »
Just wanted some feedback on how my arrangement sounds. And some good ideas that I can add to the song. Thanks 

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I really enjoy what you've got so far here! Definitely dig the ambiance early on. I enjoyed the use of reverb floating around.
A few pieces of advice: It is pretty muddy. Mind you, this is all just my objective opinion, but there isn't really enough definition to what's going on. What I mean by this is try and aim for a more defined baseline. Cut out some of that muddy low end from the pads to make space for your kick and to add more of a bass line. I think it could go a long way towards adding groove.
Definitely try and get the kick to punch through more.
The only other thing I noticed is that that arpeggiator lead sounds a bit too compressed to me.
Really aiming for constructive feedback here so let me know if you need any clarification. I really like what you've got so far! I just posted my first song a few months back and have improved a lot since. Keep it up for sure!
Hi The Dog
0:00: Intro feels a bit too side chained here, unless that was the artist choice you were going for, I would reduce the side chain and use it only after the kick comes in.
0:48: I think you could maybe pan the element (hats) a bit and lower the volume on it by at least 2 db.
1:07: Nice drum roll![]()
1:15: I would follow bettlejuice's suggestion about the kick and check all other elements and see which ones have frequencies clashing at the low end.
2:45: Good use of the white noise sweep
I hope the this helps. Keep making music