You need more breathing room and silence between parts and among your melody.

It sounds like a run on sentence.

Intro is pretty weak as well.

I saw your title or w/e, i think you need to balance you reverb with the dry setting better. look into bus effects, auxiliary channels, or send returns. <----all the same thing but compatible with most daw terminology.

it can be cleaned up a bit more

i did have a intro made for this song but i felt like it didn't transition well with what you hear now so i took it out. Ill upload the older version today.

as far as cleaning it up, i used about 5 sends with effects to make and control the lead so cleaning it up shouldn't be to hard either. in the second half the song it does tend to run on. the idea was to use stereo effects to have the sound move "behind" the listener but it didn't turn out very well so ill either fix it or take it out.

the intro is weak but yea this is pretty damn cool    you should keep working on it!

the intro is super weak, i just came up with the main part of the song and slapped something on at the beginning lol. And thanks! ill continue you it when i get back home.


also, did you think the bass was too loud? i cant decide if its to loud, on some speakers it sounds fine but on others its obnoxiously loud.

This track is muddy, the frequencies are fighting with eachother so EQ the Kick and Bass so they compliment eachother,the claps are getting lost when everything is playing try adding sample delay to make them sound wider

Instrumentation wise I would think about taking some things away as it is all abit too busy work on mixing your drums because they carry a track.

Try sticking to one genre when making a track because an EDM track can't possibly sound like a Dnb track

Hope this helps

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sounds like you have everything super loud with a brick wall limiter on top. try and play with the volume of each part to give everything its own space so they aren't fighting for room.

It translates to : "your music made me want to go kill myself why did u make dis?"


 

Maybe a little less reverb?

The story of my life lol. i have a tendency to use far to much reverb.


Thanks for the feedback, ill keep at it and make some changes.

decided to have a few tonics while i played around with a Polysix.

How is latency on the Surface? I know you said you have a Focusrite interface, but let's say you want to take it outside with just a USB powered MIDI keyboard. Would it be useable in that situation, or would you have to have your interface with you?

it would be more than perfect for this. the latency is hardly noticeable or isnt there at all.