Hey guys, thank you for all the comments.

As for the reverb, I wanted something absolutely massive, with the feeling that it is almost physically sticking to the track. This was to contrast some of the incredibly dry percussion sounds.

Glad you felt it physically Prodigal, I was aiming for sounds as almost tangible substances in this work.
Thanks for the experimental beats advice fxbip. For these beats I was creating tiny expanding patterns. And then when I put them together I was doing strange and cuts. One tip I have for experimental cross rhythm and poly rhythm stuff is to set scenes in ableton with different time sigs and bpms. Arm them for recording and you can edit on the fly and they will all record in the sequencer with some weird shit.

Soundness I will send you an email. Some of your stuff is nice, just wondering which way a collab would work and what you had in mind.

Thank you all

 

https://soundcloud.com/lighghtofficial/croesus-pieces
I made this all by myself. Enjoy please.

This starts incredibly strong, good interplay with all the elements in the beginning. The track feels like some dark version of a lot of 80s vibe stuff. I disagree with the above saying the bassline gets too complex at one point, I will say at the point he is referring to it does feel like it is dragging a little but that is all!

Hey man. good vibes to this track. Especially love some of the environmental sounds mixed in at the beginning. 
Few things I noticed though, that high pitched sweep you got going is very oppressive on the ears in places. 0.32 is one place that comes to mind, although maybe that is what you are going for! Actually throughout the track, but that could just be my taste!

Hey man beautiful piece of techno here. I think one thing you could do to add a bit of variation and dirtyness is a bit of automated distortion on the clap shuffle thing. Also like you mentioned some variation in the hats/shakers although I think that only needs be very subtle. Other than that be proud of your track. It does what it is meant to do.

check it out guys. feedback apprieciated.
https://soundcloud.com/lighghtofficial/texture-and-heft

That crunch to the sounds at the beginning is really dope. I think the flute is fine at 2:37 but it there is another sound at 3:00 which is just way way too harsh.

That said and since it is your first time I gotta say this track is really really good. Keep practicing, production and piano! You seem to be drawing inspiration from good places.