It's very nice piece of work, as your previous WIP

Oriental feeling, the voices make this unique. I like the progression coming in 0:20. The break from 0:40 - maybe add some minimal percussion ? My proposal. Also you should combine with other 'little synths' to give track more melodic feeling and flow. Nice man !
P.S. If you want to check my only one WIP, I'll be grateful as a beginner