Clap needs to be louder maybe, just a tid-bit though.

I couldn't hear any sub either haha.

Also, the sound coming in at around 0:15 is kinda weird sounding haha. I think it just needs more of a "Wub" sound to it to make it sound better (but I don't know what that would sound like exactly haha).

The piano seems a bit muddy, specifically underneath the vocals when Haley sings the verses.

I'd crank the sub just a bit on the drop, It needs more of that!

Solid track my man! I love what you did after the first drop with the "Who-ah-ohoh" or whatevers haha. The only thing I can suggest is make the part at 3:21 REALLY REALLY friggin' huge! Unfortunately the song ends right where another drop should be haha 

I absolutely adore this song! I love it when people experiment with a genre. And you sir, are doing this experiment correctly.

As for name suggestions... I would name this track "Out There", since it feels like something that would play when you'e searching for something.

Once again, you're doing an amazing job! Keep up the good work! 

I really like that name title! It fits the kind of "dark, mysterious and unknown, vibe that's going on with the track!

Thank you for the compliments man!

The Wub-Bass or whatever is way way too loud and sounds too distorted (possibly because of how loud it's getting). Even if it weren't so loud, I don't think I'd be a huge fan either :/ It's distortion sounds mostly at the high end and will probably hurt lots of ears.

Alternatively, the drums need to be louder, maybe change the snare too, not a huge fan of how much high end it takes up haha. Maybe turn the hi-hats down just a little bit.

But it has a lot of potential besides needing some better mixing / mastering. It's a WIP so of course this will need some work haha.

First off I'm usually the same way with presets and such. I only use sampled drums, maybe some voice clips but nothin' else. Everything else is "homemade."

Secondly... there's no link to the song lol.

This is dope. Love it.

lol ty <3

i like it! it´s very different from most of the trap i´ve heard before, and that´s a good thing. i think you took the acoustic part pretty on the spot.
i think you pretty much got it summarized..
longer drop, and general mixing/mastering. and this is gold in my opinion!

I am having a bit of trouble coming up with a second half of the drop hahaha but I'll do it no doubt, thanks for the compliments man!

I agree with Shikimo on basically everything he said:

Snare at beginning is a little rough. Sounds very High-End heavy (same with the hi-hats I think). I like the triplets, but maybe change the synth thats playing them.

Kick doesn't stand out during the drop, and maybe there should be a kick at some point in the intro, maybe around 0:19. The first riser into the breakdown has a little bit too much High-End as well.

The Breakdown rocks. I love the atmosphere. The reverb-snare, shaker effects, it's all really really good. At around 1:09 it gets a little muddy, but that's good on some extent since it's rising. I do like the vocal sample that goes on, but for some reason it sounds awkward right at the beginning. You do get used to it though and I do enjoy it haha.

The drop needs a ton of side-chaining. All the sounds are fighting for the same space it seems, and nothing is really coming through besides whatever is loudest... which isn't necessarily good haha.

Not a bad track though I really do like it, has a ton of "Dillon Francis-esque" attributes

Also if that is your friend's voice recording from a phone, keep it: it's amazing haha.