This is great! Loving the overall sound, only thing is change is being up the synths! It'll be hard to hear those on low quality headphones and speakers

Thanks dude! I'm probably going to add some guitar over top of it to add something more natural, as well as tackle the melody issue. Considering adding some vocals too, though unsure about that.

And no problem! Glad my feedback was useful.

Sounds a crazy, and the drums hit hard. I would say that in general if you gave some more space in the track (either fills that don't hit as hard, or change up the sound a bit)  would really make things hit harder. Right now you're going 100% the whole time, which is awesome, but it'll be the change between the quiet/more subdued stuff and what you have already that will really make it bang.

Good stuff dude, keep at it!

I took a listen to the newer version, big improvement on the original, so congrats on that. That being said, I do see what eidolon is saying with the track being a bit dissonant. It would be ok to have that go on for a little bit, but right now by the end of the song it becomes a bit tiring on the ears. For me it sounds like you're trying to have too much happen at the same time. The little breaks with the flute solo thing at 1:01 and 2:05 give it some of the space I was looking for. Maybe try playing around with some stabs instead of a synth that is constant?

I also like the idea of the breakdown around 1:25, but I feel like that would be a good opportunity to get away from the main melody if possible, just to avoid repetition.

Again, a lot of improvement from the original to the updated version, so just keep at it!