I love it. It has power. I think the next step would be to open things up a bit. Experiment with panning/study how orchestras have everything laid out and work off of that, but be careful to make sure that your low end stays in mono.

P.S. I really like that bell sound that pops up at 1:10. Maybe incorporate it more after about 1:24? 

Finding a way into a deep emotional state seems to inspire me the most. I had written a little violin riff one morning that didn't have much direction to it. That night around 12 I had just finished the season 2 finale of Rick and Morty. The (for lack of a better term) falling apart that resulted from it was enough of a push for me to develop a track. It's taken about 7-8 months to finish, but I'm happy with it. 

I would've spent more time with people and less time obsessing over my music. I went as far as going to online school in order to make more time for my music, but the isolation burnt me out where it really mattered. We find inspiration, happiness, and creativity when we invest time in people who want to invest their time in us. Now I'm too cynical, and that's something I have to break free from because I know that then I'll start moving in the right direction.