Like Ocular said, the drums have a hard time punching through. The build to the "drop" is a cool idea, and I think the break can be a bit more atmospheric. Maybe play around with dark pads and some other cool effects.

With the drums I think the issue is that it's a mixture of war drums and a kick drum.  There aren't any snares until the end of the second drop.  I'll try switching out the war drums in the drop for something like a snare because I think the kick, saws, and war drums are clashing against each other.  I'll try to rework the sidechaining to accommodate for the drums and allow them to have their room in the mix by EQing the saws and basses a bit more.  As for Ocular's input on the overcompression, I'll deal with that as well in the next draft.  What's been giving me an issue in working with this remix are the saws that I have in it.  I'll rework those and adjust the EQing and compression on those.  As for the break, I'll try to find something that'll bring more atmosphere to the track like some distorted strings/choir and a very light saw pad with a filter on it.  Thanks for the input, it's really giving me another perspective on what I currently have on the remix, really appreciate the ideas and feedback!

This was my first track under the new name 'Forgotten Parallels.'

This song was really influenced by Arkana and Porter Robinson, so enjoy!

I feel like what you have so far is amazing, and the ideas are great.  One thing I would consider is adding a bit more percussion.  I know it's the intro, but the percussion could lead into something amazing.