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WIPs / Re: neuro dnb thing WIP
« on: February 21, 2016, 06:37:37 pm »
Nice synth in the intro, but that bass comes in a little too heavy right after. Second main synth is nice too.

DnB isn't really my genre, but percussion sounds pretty good. Love the different sounds coming in and out. Where it ends now would be a good spot to soften it down, similar sounding to the intro, then build back up and get even bigger from there. Nice track.

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WIPs / Re: Where The Party? - Forte (Bassline House)
« on: February 21, 2016, 06:35:22 pm »
Not really my genre but I'll try to give some feedback.

Snare could use a bit more bite, sounds a bit too heavily compressed, and doesn't really punch as well as I think it could. For the vocal sample, try easing the transients a little bit for the chops. Comes in a little abrasively. I like the hi hats especially, percussion overall is good, and the bass is cool.

Nice FX around, good buildups and breakdowns.

Nice work.

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WIPs / Re: Daft project.
« on: February 21, 2016, 06:32:56 pm »
The high pitch sound that is in the kick is a little annoying to me. And I think you could get a bit simpler with the main synth, and add some more variation. The second synth that comes in is pretty sweet. Main is would be EQ your kick and bass a bit as you said, and try simplifying the chords a bit.

For vocals I think some incoherent sort of chopped vocals like Bonobo would work well.

Keep at it!

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WIPs / Re: Don't Stop | just trying some nu disco
« on: February 19, 2016, 01:27:03 am »
The lead after the intro is a little off-putting to me, a little too detuned in my opinion, and sounds a little empty. The groove after the intro is nice, pretty good vocoder work. Nice arrangement, flows pretty well throughout. I think a bit more variation in the percussion would go a long way as well.

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