this is dope, only thing i would add is some more 808s to the drop. Everything else is dope.

https://soundcloud.com/peter-yun-6/flume-shit-nigga/s-f1BE1

havent fixed any eq or anything yet or volumes. so just give me ur opinion.

Questions:
-Do the chords and notes sound good?
-is the build up too long?
-should I add vocals shots in there?
-should I get rid of the plucks/arp thingy on the build up.

Was in bed listening to this rn, felt like I was rolling.

this is pretty dope. you can work on the voice eq? kinda sounds like you recorded with a cheap mic. anyways, the beats dope, but the kicks can have a little bit more punch to them

you could work on ur volume, and on the drop, ur bass is not powerful enough. it needs to be harder.

https://soundcloud.com/peter-yun-6/flume-shit-nigga-wip

https://soundcloud.com/peter-yun-6/yunsie-signs

you can give me feedback on either one thanks

The intro is nice but as soon as it hits the laser part it's not so nice.

I'd like to hear some sidechain, maybe not much, but some. Now it just seems the laser thingy is sweeping trough the drums and they cant be heard at all. I'd lower the lazer resonance, it's really stabby now.

Also, you could turn up the drums a bit in the intro too.

Some variation would go a long way. The main part is too repetitive now, and I feel some other kids of lazors as fills / stabs would benefit your track. You could also work on your chords more. I personally find them somehow cheesy, I am not sure whether it is the composition or the synth.

I think it may be the composition, honestly don't know any chords for like pianos, I used my ears. More of a guitar/ drum player.  is there anyway I could reach you and message faster, I'd like to know more. Like I said I'm fairly new to producing and I'd like to learn as much as I can from more experienced people

This gives me like a anime/ Japanese vibe HAHAHAH. Anyways, it's really hard to distinguish a drop in this.