1
Show Posts
This section allows you to view all posts made by this member. Note that you can only see posts made in areas you currently have access to.
2
WIPs / Re: DUBSTEP REMIX (CRAZY SOUND DESIGN)
« on: January 03, 2017, 03:52:22 am »
Thanks for the detailed feeedback. Gonna go and try to mess with that bass a bit. Appreciate it.
I think this is a really interesting take on Devil's Lettuce! I know you said to skip to 1:30, but I listened to the whole thing anyways.
I think the main synth in first drop is super old-school dubstep, while the growls and main synth in the second drop is very new-school brostep/riddim. It might work if the synths were processed to be a bit more aggressive and cohesive - the growls are very sharp and loud while the main synths feel a bit quiet in comparison. Applying some distortion and compression on a bus or send and turning down the growls might help bring them all closer together in volume and bring them some clarity and loudness in the mix, or maybe changing your mixdown to bring down some of the other elements like the snare and the chants to give them more room in the mix.
I actually did a Moombahcore edit of the same track, using similar techniques to group process all my bass sounds. It might give you some ideas on where you could take this track!
Looking forward to the finished product!
3
WIPs / Re: Madeon - Icarus Remix WIP
« on: January 02, 2017, 10:11:57 am »
Sounds really good. I'd personally bring out the kicks a bit more. And I can also hear some vocals in the background. They're really quiet. Try to bring that up too.
4
WIPs / DUBSTEP REMIX (CRAZY SOUND DESIGN)
« on: January 02, 2017, 10:10:38 am »
So I went to Countdown NYE last night, got inspired. Just started this today. Its a "devils lettuce" remix by Bro Safari and ETC ETC! Looking for some feedback on if its good or not! Thanks in advance!
Skip to 1:30
https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/devils-lettuce/s-g7Ndv
Skip to 1:30
https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/devils-lettuce/s-g7Ndv
5
Finished Tracks / A song that tells a story
« on: September 24, 2016, 11:56:52 am »
https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/storytime
I decided to call this one "storytime". As I was making this I created a story that went along with it. Here's what I came up with. So basically, it's about a couple. Their relationship ends. Turns out the girl is psycho. The first drop can be an example of the girl begging for him to come back. The second drop, she loses her mind and well.....you can guess the rest.
I decided to call this one "storytime". As I was making this I created a story that went along with it. Here's what I came up with. So basically, it's about a couple. Their relationship ends. Turns out the girl is psycho. The first drop can be an example of the girl begging for him to come back. The second drop, she loses her mind and well.....you can guess the rest.
6
WIPs / Re: WIP(Future Bass-ish)
« on: September 19, 2016, 09:56:42 pm »
I really like the intro a lot! On the drop it lacks in the low end. Bring out that sub bass more! I like how you bring out the 8bit arpy thing! Really good so far!
7
WIPs / Re: My First Attempt At Dubstep
« on: September 02, 2016, 06:19:50 am »
I use ozone to master. And I do have studio monitors (krk's not the best) but I live in an apartment so I cant really play it loud enough.
8
WIPs / Re: The Middle - DJ Snake (Future Bass Remix)
« on: September 01, 2016, 01:16:06 pm »
Sounds like the saw chords are getting chopped off everytime you change chords really fast. sounds pretty good so far. not much there for me to listen to
9
WIPs / Re: My First Attempt At Dubstep
« on: September 01, 2016, 06:57:37 am »I have a lot of the same critiques as the last song, to be honest - It feels like you're just pushing it to be full energy all the time and there's way too much high frequency content blasting at all moments. The drop basses are really tight, but they have NO impact because all you're doing is blaring crash cymbals and hi hats and white noise nonstop from the moment the song starts to the moment the song ends.
Take some time to reference some tracks off of Firepower Records or Never Say Die Records - artists like SkisM, Must Die!, and Eptic. In particular, and I cannot stress this enough, pay attention to what's going on in the top end. Your songs have a ton of potential to be absolutely massive, but you suck all the weight out of your tracks and exhaust your listener's ears with all that hissy and noise-based content.
Aka, dynamics make or break a track.
Another suggestion I have is once you bring it back the 2nd time, use different sounds completely, but follow a similar rhythm. The lead is sick, but I'd suggest something grimier for the 2nd time around. Adds more range as well as changes it up!
Hey thanks for the feedback. And whem you say the 2nd time do you mean the drop? or build up/ intro. Like I said its my first attempt.
P.S: I use gaming headphones to mix so I should probably invest in some legit headphones.
10
WIPs / Re: My First Attempt At Dubstep
« on: August 31, 2016, 11:09:33 am »I'm gonna have to agree with Mussar. I know dubstep is notorious for maximum sausage fatness but I think this song can benefit from having more dynamic range. Your drop will hit much harder if the rest of the song is quieter.
no sausage fattener used
11
WIPs / Re: My First Attempt At Dubstep
« on: August 31, 2016, 09:14:06 am »
Thanks for this feedback. This track was just to see if I can make a dubstep track. i really do have to have to pay attention to my frequencies. And those hi hats and cymbals were just loops i used. I'll get back to it seriously and post an update.
I have a lot of the same critiques as the last song, to be honest - It feels like you're just pushing it to be full energy all the time and there's way too much high frequency content blasting at all moments. The drop basses are really tight, but they have NO impact because all you're doing is blaring crash cymbals and hi hats and white noise nonstop from the moment the song starts to the moment the song ends.
Take some time to reference some tracks off of Firepower Records or Never Say Die Records - artists like SkisM, Must Die!, and Eptic. In particular, and I cannot stress this enough, pay attention to what's going on in the top end. Your songs have a ton of potential to be absolutely massive, but you suck all the weight out of your tracks and exhaust your listener's ears with all that hissy and noise-based content.
12
WIPs / My First Attempt At Dubstep
« on: August 30, 2016, 10:50:36 am »
https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/huyomaufwfa/s-d4CK9
Any feedback is welcome. The vocals are way too loud, I know
Any feedback is welcome. The vocals are way too loud, I know
13
WIPs / Re: At a loss lately... What do you guys think of these?
« on: August 23, 2016, 06:58:55 am »
liq dis diq
14
WIPs / Re: Healing |Bassnectar and Porter|
« on: August 21, 2016, 12:20:01 pm »
Typing as I listen. That bass wub you have can be filtered in. Automate the volume too. Try to have a more dramatic build up. The drop doesnt really sound like a drop. You're using the same sounds and such that if I skipped to a random part in the song I wouldn't be able to determine if it's the drop or build up.
15
Finished Tracks / Re: My First Track! Veska - Reaching The End
« on: August 21, 2016, 12:16:37 pm »
Typing as I listen. The piano seems a little bit too loud. I like how you fade in the drums. Maybe try filtering in that arp. That kick you used on the drop isnt that great, or maybe eq it better. Not my type of style of music, but considering its your first track well done. Keep at it. We all start somewhere
The Producer's Forum © 2016
