First of all, the kick is kinda overpowering.  The lead that comes in at 0:27 is too loud. I really wish there was a build up leading to the drop. I can tell you're new to producing. This is pretty good considering you're new.  Just listened to one of your other tracks called "Illusions". Try to get some uniqueness into your stuff. Sounds very generic (being honest).

Check out this song I did

https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/yunsie-pull-up-on-em/s-5ZPgu

Sick take on it man! Love the quick filtering after the first beat in the drops, really adds a nice fullness right before letting the whole thing go. Drums are nice & tight and the panning is lit. Dope! 

thank u my man!

First off I think the vocals are too low. The kick is really low. There no boom in it. A lot of low end missing. I can tell you just started producing! I feel as your concept is there you're just not executing it well.

Heres one of my new releases. Maybe you can learn a couple stuff from it (Im not that great either but im getting there)

 https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/deorro-butt-naked-yunsie-remix

This looks like it's shaping up to be a banger! That drop is insane, and the phrasing is spot on. The two main issues right now are the mixdown and the energy levels.

For the mixdown, the kick is a little quiet, while the hats and the 808 are fairly loud. Even listening at a low volume, those high hats are probably the most present element of your mix, even above your lead line.

In terms of energy, you have a great sense of tension and release with your drop but the song starts very hyped and with a TON of high frequency content, which pulls away from the overall impact of the drop. There's very little time for the ear to rest, and that can get exhausting.

You could probably reference some NGHTMRE and Baauer tracks to get an idea of how the song should flow and how you could possibly approach the mixdown. Keep it up, this is gonna turn out awesome!

heres my almost final mix https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/deorro-butt-naked-remix-yunsie/s-G8C4H

When that arp comes in, maybe cut off some of the low end on that pluck in the beginning!
Saws have very nice layering, love the vocal. I like your kick, but it's lacking in transient for me.
Be careful on your last build up, there was a lot of elements going on. I've read things where the untrained ear can only really hone on 3 different things going on, but you had a lot going on which is kind of just distracting.

Overall this is good, I really like it. Good job!

thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate the detailed feedback. Ill take that into thought!

https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/zara-larsson-mnek-never-forget-you-yunsie-remix-1


new link!

yeahhhh you should do somethin bout that computer of yours lmao

Wow dude I fucking love this! Followed and liked a few songs. You got talent man.

haha! i Saw! THANKS!!!