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Messages - Bertie South

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Rules & Announcements / Re: about verification criteria
« on: January 13, 2016, 09:34:35 pm »
Maybe do the opposite and have 'unverification' where anybody trying to impersonate someone better known than them gets a big red X next to their name and their status changed to 'I am a fake punk-ass bitch'.

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WIPs / Re: Electro WIP
« on: January 13, 2016, 09:31:41 pm »
Dunno if I'm imagining this but between 0:37 and 0:41 the bits of your track seem to be ever so slightly out of time with each other.

I'm not a huge fan of vocals generally, but a vocal would definitely add something to it. It needs a little something to make it sound bigger. Solid track though!

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WIPs / Re: Blue Moon (WIP)
« on: January 13, 2016, 09:22:53 pm »
Between 2:11 and 2:37 that kick sidechain is ducking the volume a tiny bit after some of the notes in some cases - might be a quantisation thing because I didn't notice it anywhere else. You could probably ease off on the sidechain a little too. It's a cool track though, I like the ideas you have going in there.

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WIPs / Re: trap + ambient stuff = ???
« on: January 13, 2016, 09:03:21 pm »
Not totally sold on that chopped up fill thing around 1:12 - it doesn't keep the rhythm of the track. If you know what I mean.

After 1:48 there's an extra kick every bar that sounds just a bit *too* out of time, seems a bit unnatural. Like it comes slightly early but should be slightly late maybe.

Overall I like this though man. Nice contrast of harsh/heavy beats and soft melodic stuff.

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WIPs / Re: Bipolar Remake Feedback?
« on: January 13, 2016, 08:45:03 pm »
Yeah finish it. I'd be interested to see where you go with this.

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WIPs / Re: Techno ID6 WIP
« on: January 13, 2016, 08:36:20 pm »
The link has stopped working, did you take it down?

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Inspiration/Creativity/Motivation / Re: How to protect your own music
« on: January 13, 2016, 08:21:08 pm »
idk if soundcloud autolimits their tracks
I do remember reading on the Anjunabeats forum that Soundcloud's MP3 converter is garbage (low bitrate and really outdated algorithm), so there's that.

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Very interesting thread. I got back into production last year after a long time off and have been working on the same tune since maybe July/August. In that time I must have spent at least 100 hours on it, but that would probably be less if I knew what I was doing. Determined to finish it though..

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1. You shouldn't necessarily be afraid of being formulaic or 'unoriginal'. Some formulas are important, and changing something just so it's not formulaic isn't a good idea. Besides which nothing is truly new, and every person who creates is ultimately recombining things that already exist, in one form or another. Sometimes you'll think you've come up with something great by yourself, only to later discover that it's already been done or that it came from something you heard before. It doesn't matter.

2. A track can feel like it's missing something because the quality of the sounds you're using isn't good enough, or they're not interesting enough, rather than because there's not enough going on in your track. If you add several more elements to a track that seemed to be missing something and it still feels that way, this is probably what's up.

3. After trying mindfulness for a while, I found that I noticed new things in music that I'd listened to dozens of times before. There's not definitely a link, but never assume that your awareness of things is as acute as it could be, and find ways to improve it.

4. The key to just about everything: focus, patience, persistence.

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WIPs / Re: Sandro Silva - Someone Like You (Remix) [WIP]
« on: January 13, 2016, 06:29:45 pm »
^ Agree with that. It sounds good, but it would help to hear the original track.

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WIPs / Re: Melodic/Future House Snippet
« on: January 13, 2016, 06:27:52 pm »
I think the sidechaining is too heavy but the kick itself doesn't have enough impact. Try playing around with compression and/or layering on the kick (check one of the other subforums for advice on that). Layering that synth on the drop (or in general) will probably help with impact as well. I like the chords and melody ftr.

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WIPs / Re: New WIP electro house (maybe). Finish or no?
« on: January 13, 2016, 06:19:08 pm »
I quite like the chord progression and those keys in the beginning. Not sure about that high lead synth though.

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WIPs / Re: Crossing Paths [Future Bass WIP] | Keep or Trash?
« on: January 13, 2016, 06:16:34 pm »
That last chord in the loop is a bit odd, and the progression from the previous chord(s) doesn't seem very natural. Apart from that, melodically speaking I quite like this. I wouldn't trash it, but it might be worth coming back to it once you're more confident about what chord progressions work or don't.

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WIPs / Re: New DnB Track | Hows The Mix?
« on: January 13, 2016, 06:10:38 pm »
Hey,

I'm not super keen on that piano - it sounds a bit plain. It might sit better if it was an octave higher up too.

The mix doesn't sound to bad to me but I only have headphones to listen on. I'd say finish it because it's always good to finish things - or you get into the habit of starting something new every time you get bored or stuck with something.

I like melodic d'n'b but I also like drum 'n' bass to have some grit to it. Just my personal preference but might be an idea as to where to take this.

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WIPs / Re: lost in a fictional city | wip
« on: January 12, 2016, 11:40:17 pm »
I assume https://soundcloud.com/amoxmusic/a-late-night-stroll-into-a-fictional-city is the track you're linking to.

It does sound pretty lo-fi. It almost sounds like it could have been done for effect, but not quite.

I think you've overdone the sidechaining, and that snare is missing some top end.

I like the keys or synth or whatever it is that runs through the track (stops at 2:30) though

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