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Finished Tracks / Re: Feel | My First Track [not sure of genre]
« on: January 19, 2016, 05:08:25 pm »
I like the idea very chill could use some better transitions? how long have you been producing?

What kind of transitions and for what parts? Thanks!

Simple but executed well. I enjoyed it. Had a nice atmosphere.

Yes it is very simple, cause that's about all I can do right now! Haha thank you

That crunch to the sounds at the beginning is really dope. I think the flute is fine at 2:37 but it there is another sound at 3:00 which is just way way too harsh.

That said and since it is your first time I gotta say this track is really really good. Keep practicing, production and piano! You seem to be drawing inspiration from good places.

Can you identify the sound further? It's the same flute sound, but maybe it just gets too loud with all of the parts going on.

Thank you for the kind comments, though

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Finished Tracks / Re: Feel | My First Track [not sure of genre]
« on: January 18, 2016, 07:44:48 am »
Bump

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Finished Tracks / Re: Feel | My First Track [not sure of genre]
« on: January 17, 2016, 05:27:31 pm »
Being that this is your first track i wasn't expecting this... Kinda makes me feel like wtf have i been doing. @2:37 that flute sound is a bit high. Kinda kills that chill vibe. @3:55 its a bit too quiet. Pretty cool over all guy!

Hey thanks for your reply. I was struggling a lot with the flute sound at 2:37 because in an earlier version it was much sharper, and so I lowered down a lot to make it mix better. But there was a feeling I got with the sharp sound that I lost when I lowered it so I tried to find a middle ground - but I guess I could not.

And yeah 3:55 is definitely too quiet, I tried to make it louder and more impactful - but to be honest I just don't know how. I tried a lot of things, but in the end I told myself "my first 100 tracks won't really be good, and my first track definitely won't be perfect" so I decided to leave it how it was. Maybe I was too eager to finish, but it's never too late to go back and make changes.

Thanks for responding man!

@elixier - I've uploaded the earlier version if you want to hear the difference. It replaced the old link.

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Finished Tracks / Feel | My First Track [not sure of genre]
« on: January 17, 2016, 05:00:15 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/peterlambe8/feel

That's the link. I wasn't going for a specific genre I just kind of went with what I was hearing and this is the result. What do you guys think? It's my first finished track, and I've been producing since the beginning of January and playing piano/learning music theory since September.

I know I have a long way to go, but I really am proud of what I've come up with so far. I'm so happy to finally be producing music

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