definitely a cool start. A few things I noticed:

-I'd get a different kick sample. It doesn't seem to fit. But that could just be my ears.
-I think you need some more frequencies in the low mid area. Maybe another bass layer or low pad to fill out the sound.
-The low end could use a bit of control. Kinda tough at times to tell what's going on down there.
-it feels a bit narrow. I think it could definitely use more stereo width.

Musically I really enjoyed it! I think it could use some work in the mix category but it's dope!

thanks! i will experiment with the stereo width and eq to try fit the sounds in one, maybe some kinda reese sounds can help to fill the thing out. Really appreciate the comment! :

oh yeah that is a common mistake when you are first starting, the best way to use compression is as little as possible, only use it when you need it.  If any channels are clipping lower the channels that are going into the group/bus or lower the individual sound.  A limiter is mainly used at the very end of a mastering chain to make the final gain increase without clipping (going over 0 dB).  If an individual sound needs it, compress it.  At your group level or bus level compressors are typically used lightly to "glue" the elements together, or to control peaks and achieve a higher RMS value.  You are basically doing the same thing with your limiters however they are much more aggressive and can kill your dynamic range.  Mix your track as well as you can and make it as loud as you can with nothing on the master channel.  If you can achieve this your track will sound very good when it goes to get compressed in the mastering stage, you will achieve commercial level loudness without having to push your track too hard and killing the dynamics.

Actually i know that xD, but ive seen people using limiters and i wanted to prove it, i guess if i dont know exactly what im doing i shouldnt compress the sounds too much, in fact i think that a controlled clipping many times is even better than compression, thank you for take your time and give me that long explanation, really apreciate it, cheers!

Yea it sounds over-compressed / over-limited.  Do you have a limiter on the master?

yea im using ozone 5 and the maximizer option and fabfilter-L, im trying to fixing now, the problem when i produce is that i have a very low cpu and it makes that horrible "clicking sound" when cpu is at 100% and it is such a pain working like this but anyway, im using limiters too in individual channels, could that be a problem too? im using it in almost all the synths

Eq - fruity parametric eq2
Multiband compression - Maximus, fruity multiband compressor,OTT.
Compression - API 2500 Stereo/Mono
Sidechain Compression - DMG Compassion/Fruity Limiter
Reverb - Valhalla Room
Synth - Spire, diva, sylenth1,harmless,sytrus, and sometimes serum.
Daw - Fl Studio 12
Extras
Dimensión expander from Xfer
Distortion - ohmicide,fruity waveshaper, fabfilter saturn
Limiters - fabfilter L-Pro/Invisible Limiter
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The beginnig sound very smooth.
The second version is much better. It has a nice beat, some good sounds.

i reckon im going to work in the second one, i think that adding more sounds with the combination of a good sound design could be a thing ty for the comment!

https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/126-clap wanted to know what you think of this by now :

this was so good homie, id love hearing a nice drop at like :34 with kicks n a nice clap sidechained w the beat, keep it up w this one

i dont have much time lately cause of studies :c but i'll try to finish it as soon as posible! i'll post the final result! cheers!

let me know what do you think and suggestions!
https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/she-the-quest/s-mU8Pt