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WIPs / Re: Kaskade Atmosphere Remix
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:58:19 am »
Quote from: Heymac on January 30, 2016, 07:23:10 pm
https://soundcloud.com/heymac/atmosphere-heymac-remix/s-B7a21

Been meaning to make a remix of this for a while. thoughts on anything from arrangement to mixing whatever you think.

Its a cool song man, you just need on more FX things like a white noise, to gey more frequency energy on build up... and try to add some layers on the drop, i dont know but i feel missed something!!

but keep it work man ^^

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WIPs / Re: almost finished my original.. was hoping i could get some tips
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:54:27 am »
Quote from: Jaidyn on January 30, 2016, 12:33:37 pm
this is my new original, and i was hoping if i could get feedback... I would really appreciate it!!! hope you like it :)

https://soundcloud.com/kinetics101/song-2/s-5fMSX

Obs: i follow you man, and continue to give more details of this song please :)

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WIPs / Re: almost finished my original.. was hoping i could get some tips
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:53:44 am »
Quote from: Jaidyn on January 30, 2016, 12:33:37 pm
this is my new original, and i was hoping if i could get feedback... I would really appreciate it!!! hope you like it :)

https://soundcloud.com/kinetics101/song-2/s-5fMSX

This is really a good song man, really!!!

You just need to make a good structure to make your song match... its a little details, on the build up when you do, fill up something on this things...

but you have a good sense of melody bro, i love it! ^^

just keep it up and finish this song :D

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WIPs / Re: A remix I started working on recently for the song wild-troye Sivan
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:46:27 am »
Quote from: DiscoShit on January 29, 2016, 05:12:36 pm
I'd really appreciate any possible feedback, no matter how harsh. Thanks in advance.
https://soundcloud.com/alex-burelle/wild-remix

Hey man i hear here, well what you think to get a linear bass on the drop? or verse when say? this is ideia when i say is good because after this you can make a structure and work better on your song!

try it ^^

but the song is cool man, keep it up!!

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WIPs / Re: Future bass track
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:42:34 am »
Quote from: Seizure on January 30, 2016, 09:17:54 pm
hey folks,

so i started this as some trancy future bass stuff, but i thought it would be cool to add a trap drop. i really could use some feedback, because i am kind off lost since this one took me lots of hours. and i really want to know if it is too complex, or too distorted etc. so just give me your honest opinion even if you absolutely hate the idea.

thanks a lot guys!

https://soundcloud.com/auxitup/aiu-1/s-bNEVq

Hey man!!

Well have something good here man ^^

the song is really dope, just need more mix things, its little things to do after you finish this song!!!

I dont have more things to say for you, the structure is really dope man you get a future bass thing n mixed with hardstyle kicks hahaha this is nice!!

Keep it up, i follow you on soundcloud ^^




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WIPs / Re: Saturday Mornings WIP
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:36:48 am »
Well man here go...

i can see you work to do what you think about music, but is really you try to get something for you music make sense, read more mix things, create or copy a music theory, work on melody because here dont match with other elements...

but continue to work man, all here have a start, But you have a great start, just keep working hard to improve their ideas, and get them to your DAW, I know this is difficult but you will get! ^^

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WIPs / Re: Suticase (rewrok/remix) ~
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:30:36 am »
Quote from: Szub! on January 31, 2016, 01:06:03 am
Dear the ones who read this,

I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. :)

https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiff

Hey man!!

Well i listen here, and well... check the key of the melody dont match with the vocal, pad anything, just check this... and after try to get a structure of your song, like a intro, build up, drop... something when make sense for the music theory! ^^

Have a good production session :)

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WIPs / Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 30, 2016, 08:32:37 pm »
Quote from: safolly on January 30, 2016, 01:30:48 pm

This is great man. Nothing i can hear right now that i would change:)  The arrangement is on point, the supersaws are really nice, the bass saw is not too loud, it´s such a dynamic track! changes all the time, i really enjoyed this one.

You took care of the small adjustments you had to from the previous version, and you nailed it.

Bravo.

Glad to know you like man, and yeah i work so much to do this song, and i work more to finish up ^^

Thank you so much man, soon i release this song, and i follow you back to :)

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WIPs / Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 30, 2016, 08:30:07 pm »
Quote from: Apeidon on January 30, 2016, 11:10:40 am
it has a good structure and the sounds are good! but in my opinion the supersaws sometimes seem like they need more power! try to add more layers, play with the stereo enhancement or even use multiband distortion to stand out some frequencies! hope i could help with my poor knowledge! :D

Tnx for you feedback man, hmm... this is interesting, i have two layers to do this sidechain, maybe a up the volume of one or up the mid high frequency of one to dont lost more quality of them, but really tnx man ^^

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WIPs / Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 30, 2016, 08:27:28 pm »
Quote from: Arktopolis on January 30, 2016, 07:51:35 am
Don't remember if I listened to the previous version. Anyway, to me it sounds like a quality track, and I can't really come up with any major criticism. I like the vocal hook, there's something relaxing about it.

One detail: at about 2:25 there's a small glitch in the supersaw, the level goes down, so you might wanna check where that's coming from. Actually there's a similar thing going on at 2:05.

Really tnx for you feedback, and yeah i can see what you talk about, i dont know but maybe is a intruser sidechain, or i check the keys, but i fix it soon ^^

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WIPs / Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 30, 2016, 05:56:04 am »
Hey guys i post a time before a song when i still work, and i receive a lot of good feedbacks you... well i work more on this song, and now i have this...

Private Link: https://soundcloud.com/articofc/v2-1/s-HsTop

Well i think this song is on the right way, but i want to know, what you think about that? i need more feedbacks!! ^^

Thanks again dudes :)

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WIPs / Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« on: January 16, 2016, 04:16:10 am »
Same thing when erik say, put more layers on mid section, "pad´s" is a good option to work on this track, try some pads on intro, and build up to!! ^^

check you melody keys on the drop togheter with the intro, all two ideas dont have a good combination in the same song.

but keep work on it man have good ideas! :)

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WIPs / Re: OPINIONS ?
« on: January 16, 2016, 04:12:49 am »
Cool song man!

but i see your problem on the structure of the song, well try to make a melody, n after you try something like intro, break, drop, but all thing have some percent of your melody, when this, your music have a logic sense, and this is good because after you make this you song still good to work, n make more thing, n finish all structure. ^^

but keep it up man, n have good work :)

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WIPs / Re: TNAN - Desire WIP (Working on mixdown)
« on: January 16, 2016, 04:08:45 am »
The song is really nice, but the voice seems like on the back at the track, "backgrond" ndetro say this to ^^

try to elevate the mid a lot, same at the high a lot to!

but all the track is good ^^

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WIPs / Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« on: January 16, 2016, 04:05:08 am »
Tnx for you feedback erik!!

yeah i miss a lot the lead on the drop n other parts os the song, but i work on this now n all entire music to ^^

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