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WIPs / Re: 128 trance housey
« on: April 24, 2016, 07:21:45 pm »
Hmmm.... its cool man, the drop section its good some variations, good melody, good intro, maybe you need to improve more the structure of all entire song, just details, but i see somthing like "soundprank" here, just work dude, just do it, its a big song here ^^

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WIPs / Re: Sprout - Forlorn [WIP]
« on: April 24, 2016, 07:14:17 pm »
It´s cool man, i dont know what your direction with this arrangement, but its a good song, good atmosphere, good fx, songs... well if you dont decied about the direction of your song just try to get more "new waves" like future bass or something like \o/

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WIPs / Re: Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« on: March 21, 2016, 06:32:38 am »
Really tnx guys for you feedback,^i check here in my project and i do my best to work on my songs, the feedbacks of you two guys is on the point, tnx again ^^

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WIPs / Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« on: March 20, 2016, 06:46:10 pm »
Well guys there is 2 songs when i work for my EP any feedback its good ^^

https://soundcloud.com/articofc/sets/terra-19/s-NLZW5

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WIPs / Re: Audien style progressive house
« on: February 18, 2016, 04:17:20 am »
Hey guys,what do you think of this WIP? Be brutal on the feedbacks :p

https://soundcloud.com/jiunn-yan-1/audien-style/s-vlogx

Hmm.. the melody and the idea is good.

but you need to more, well i have something to say for you...

Isolate n separete all area in the mix low, mid, hig for the first... after, you check your mid chanel, have much mid thing work togheter its not good, after this, check the build up, when start the drop you need to put a sweep down, and something like "crash" when the drop start, more sidechain for the kick make a presence, another thing on your build up, make automation link, when increase the volume, and try on your EQ to decrease the frequency to the high, make this with a automation link, but take easy on the cut, i make this on some chanels behind the drop start, what i make this? is to cut some energey before the drop start... its like to have breath and jump! :)

keep secret dude, this a something secret when i work ^^

check... https://soundcloud.com/articofc/montem-wip/s-e5U01

there is what i try to say for you feel free to check somethings when i say for you on my song, its a exemple.

keep work man :)

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WIPs / Re: Newbie: Feedback on my track, Thanks!
« on: February 18, 2016, 04:03:42 am »
Hey Guys,

So as I have just moved to Denmark, I still do not have monitors. I do everything thru headphones (even that they are quite good headphones from Numark). Unfortunatelly I have found out, that this is a bigger problem than I thought it would be :/ Nevertheless, I would still very much appreciate feedback on this WIP.
 
Thank you! :)


Hmmm.. well lets start, for first the sond is not good but have a lot of things to say about this!

all musics have a theory, have sense, have a melody theory, like intro, build up drop something when have sense, for you if you use a simply music theory like... "well here is the intro, after is break, after build up, after drop, and this is how we works..."

its good to try something like this because its good for you, you can work more and do your best because you have a musica theory, the mix need more things, isolate all areas and separate, low, mid, and high frequency for first, after this you have a good mix for the first impression... but all your ideas is not bad, but you need to work more and take more lesson to pass what you think to your daw ^^

keep work dude, have a good day :)

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WIPs / Re: Bleeding Love Remix - WIP | Fox Chase | Future Bass
« on: February 18, 2016, 03:58:15 am »
Love to hear some feedback, not really sure what to think.

How are Levels?

Is it cluttered in drop?

General Feedback plz

https://soundcloud.com/foxchase/remix-bleeding-love-wip

E really like man, its a great song, maybe if you cut a little the high frequency on 1:09, its a just details!

but the song is good to me man ^^

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WIPs / Re: dubstep drop trying some bass :O
« on: February 03, 2016, 10:59:21 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/stuff here ive tried to make some bass stuff :)

Well man this song is prety good, have a nice energy, remenber song like snails, excision e etc...

its good to me :)

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https://soundcloud.com/whoisbloom/whoisbloom/s-b0c4x
been working on this for like a year or sumthin, i honestly appreciate any amount of feedback

Hmmm... Sounds good to me, i think if you check the atack when you use on all overal thing in project, and try some necessary cut on the mid lead, and high lead to.

Anyway, this track is good man ^^

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WIPs / Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 31, 2016, 05:55:19 pm »
Really digging this track dude! The vibes from it are great! I think it could sound really cool in the final drop if you added some gliding type lead!

I'm glad to know that my music this good for other ears too :)

I see you feedback, and try to put on my song ^^

Tnx man!!!

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WIPs / Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 31, 2016, 05:53:27 pm »
Dude! This track is so cool! It has a great vibe and everything suits well together! A small thing though; the drop saws have a little bit too much detune on them, i feel. Besides that, its a cool track. It doesnt gets boring or anything you keep it refreshing so thats a good thing! Keep it up!

Really tnx man, really ^^

i check here the saw on the drop to... :)

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WIPs / Re: Protanopia WIP
« on: January 31, 2016, 05:13:02 am »
tried to mix trancey elements into a 95bpm electro track, its a very early wip, there's a lot to be done, maybe give me some suggestions????

https://clyp.it/mhvlldc5

This is a cool song man, all the idea is cool but check the key of the lead on 2:34, and check the bassline key to, try to get something linear, after this you work more on theses bassline ^^

but the song is really cool man, keep it up :)

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WIPs / Re: DANZ - ID || Festival Anthem-esque
« on: January 31, 2016, 05:08:49 am »
Just started this yesterday and I wanted to give it that whole arena feel with the orchestra drums, I know the mix isnt good yet I havent finished composing yet. I hope you guys enjoy :) I am also really not good at making intros oh well, my creativity has a limit still :P

https://soundcloud.com/danz_official/id-danz/s-ltmPf

PS: Would love ideas for 2nd break (:
PPS: I switched to LANDR low quality mp3 mastering just to test it.

Hmmm... i see a good potential in this song man, but i see what you try to make on this song, you try to get some "mainstreams" things like progressive house, the drop is really dope man, really, but the intro, build up... i dont know dont make sense for this drop... if you try to change the build up and the intro when match more with the drop!?

try it ^^

but keep it up man :)



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WIPs / Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« on: January 31, 2016, 05:02:12 am »
Link: https://soundcloud.com/ciasmusic/thermal/s-Kvj0T
just want to hear some feedback :D

Well something like JAUZ, BASS HOUSE... anyway, the idea is cool, just try to make this song more possible when you can, add more layers on the intro, build up, or drop...

but keep it up man, nice work!

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WIPs / Re: BOOLIN W A CELL...phone-------------- guppi
« on: January 31, 2016, 04:59:45 am »
Sup people, so i whipped this up last night,  ill admit its very different n i really just like making music i like hearing.. (isnt that what were all here 2 do)?? haha  :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
anyways guys, post ur thoughts, thanks

https://soundcloud.com/ollyater/mada-is-enraged-adam-is

The link on the song dont work... :/

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