Hey Guys,

Thought you guys might like this remix I did of Adrian Alexander & Skylane - Stratosphere 

Thanks for the detailed feedback and effort. I haven't spent much time on mixing, i am trying to get a feel for the track. So most of what's going on is ideas. Once I feel I have everything in place I go and layer the smaller melodies and mix from there.
As for not being experienced.. If you have ears your feedback is valued

Thanks Vera I will keep your feedback in mind for my next track.

Thanks @forumpolice lol I posted here coz most tracks in finished tracks are feedback related.. I thought people Might Like this here

Thanks guys. I am going to give it a try over the weekend. Will try to replicate one of these tracks and post my attempt

I am no pro, but will try to put a project together to give you an idea. Which DAW are you using? I can do Ableton or FL Studio

Any chance you could explain how you are processing and layering the white noise layer (with the bass), and what frequency range it is?

Suggestions: Maybe take a little bit off the high hat that's sitting on top of the kick. Also, I'm not sure if it's the bass or the chords, but something in the drop is a bit... harsh and, the drop would benefit from the chord filling up more of the higher frequency range.

Coming along nicely. I really like your breakdown.

To be honest, its nothing special.. Just a white noise sample, with some eq. I am still trying to get it to fit the way I want.

love this! mix needs work but you can sort that out after.

You need a nice sax playing sustained notes with lots of reverb. I hope you finish this track!!!

Kick isn't fixed and drop feels empty in the mid-high range I think

Just took a listen on samsung buds, I have to agree. it must be my headphones coz I cant hear this on them. I changed the kick completely. Will post an update soon