This gives me like a anime/ Japanese vibe HAHAHAH. Anyways, it's really hard to distinguish a drop in this.

Funny you mentioned that, because that´s exactly what i´m going for! hahahaha! i actually have a few samples form an anime show i plan on using!
Please elaborate, do you mean like it´s not "heavy" enough? or is it composition wise?

arvellan_design:
Great tip! will definitely work out something like that!

really like the atmosphere on this. and as noahnorrod said, the vocals fit like a glove to this track.
great job so far!

been working on a track for a while, in the future bass genre (which is new too me), and i would appreciate some feedback don´t be afraid to be harsh.
there are a few things missing, a small part where there will be some sort of vocals. just haven´t figured that one out yet.

https://soundcloud.com/stein-folly/tsundere-demo/s-PZCm8

i like it! it´s very different from most of the trap i´ve heard before, and that´s a good thing. i think you took the acoustic part pretty on the spot.
i think you pretty much got it summarized..
longer drop, and general mixing/mastering. and this is gold in my opinion!

i think you did a pretty decent job so far, as i am not a great sound designer myself, i probably won´t say anything you have not figured out yourself, but it sounds like the original is a bit softer and wider... not sure how a reverb will fix things, but may be a start to get a little wider sound. it also sounds like they youse a bit more whitenoise than you are, but it might be a false accusation on my hand, as i did not listen to it on proper speakers...

the melody is quite catchy! and i like how the kick punches through in the drop. however, i think the lead in the drop is a wee bit loud as well as the snare and hats, it "hurts" a little bit when i turn the volume up and especially the hats use a little bit too much of the space.
The progression and layout of the track itself is great, be careful tho, so it does not get to repetitive when you go into that second break, maybe chill it out with some strings.

i´ve got faith in this one! lookin foreward to hear the end result.

i love the relaxing bassline, and the first downtempo has a really good effect(i lied, upon second listening i fucking love it!) the midsection could definitely be worked with. maybe adding some arpeggiated bells, make it a tiny bit more interesting or perhaps it will work out when you get the vocals?... great chord progression as well! and your synths/basslines is on point bro!

The intro though... something's not sitting quite right with me there, i feel like it doesn't fit that well to be honest. to clarify, the first 10 seconds is pretty damn nice, and the ambient-ish sound from :45 is good, but there is something in the middle there that doesn't fit all that well to the "vibe"

your beat, i've got nothing to say on that, except it's pretty damn good!

would actually be kinda cool if you worked in some retro samples from old nintendo games or something along that line in the small pauses...

in all, a great start! can't wait to hear the finished result!