Hey Danz, this is awesome!   You may think that you aren't good at making intros, but I gotta tell you man, you hooked me in from the first second based on how much I enjoyed the intro!  I think you are awesome at them judging from this in my opinion, keep it up! 

The song in general was great from my end, I enjoyed the arrangement that you put together so far, it kept me interested the entire time.

I know that you are still putting together the mix and arrangement, so don't want to go too deep into that as you may still need to do a lot of that work.  One thing I noticed is around 1:15 - 1:19, it sounds very filled out here frequency wise, but something seems to drop off after from 1:20 - 1:29 which is making it sound like you have some frequency gaps or something missing here element wise that wasn't before.  Hope that makes sense man!

Looking forward to the finished version of this, this sounds huge so far, great job!

Would absolutely love to hear your feedback on my track if you would like to listen

http://theproducersforum.com/index.php?topic=2087.0

this is really nice man, perfect mix between tranceing out and raging face. cool vibes!

cool track! small pointers; your kick is too loud, try to lower it. also the sidechain on the sub is pretty agressive if you ask me. but thats just me. that nexus synth has been used a lot of times, i personally would go for a more ''unique'' sounding synth. But besides that its a real cool track if you ask me!