I hope I even was able to embed that correctly

soooo anyways! My name is London! and I've really only started producing within the past 8 months. I have a little background with music but really only as far as guitar tablature (which I became pretty good at, being self taught).
Since I discovered electronic music about 3 1/2 years ago I instantly feel in love after I heard porter robinson's and funny enough mat zo's "easy". Basically after being in the scene for a while I decided about a year ago that I wanted to try for myself and I decided to pick up mixing. Quickly I realized if I wanted to do anything with this then I needed to learn production!
I started off with trying to sample loops/stabs/drum loops/etc but I didn't even know anything about tempo and learned I wouldn't have any control over any of my sounds and I would never be able to create anything worth a damn. Now I've tried to cram in as many free online music theory classes as I could find on udemy and youtube. As well as tutorials and what have you.
This is still a WIP and I haven't even put anything through the mixer yet. There is only some small volume envelopes and automation. But I actually do know quite a lot about mixing and mastering as far as sidechaining/reverb/EQ/compression/limiting the basics. I just haven't done it because there wasn't much need for it yet and I felt like the idea of the song is coming out.
After my long explanation and I do hope you made it this far with me

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE if there is any tips / pointers / ideas / really anything you could think of please share with me! It really is a dream of mine to be able to create music and be a great composer and producer! I think I'm on the right track but teamwork makes the dream work and I hope I can get a lot of great feedback!
Thank you everyone!!
tl;dr I'm kinda/really new at this and need feedback please! Not so much on the mixing side, but composition as well as any ideas and thoughts!
https://soundcloud.com/londoncobb/untitledlove/s-KWDXW