Hey guys,
This is the first track I've actually finished arranging, I like the harmony/melody a lot but the production is quite amateur so I would really appreciate if you guys could critique me to death on it.
Link:
https://soundcloud.com/pedromtavares/sunshine-1st-draft/s-ZPItK (I couldn't embed it for some reason)
I tried using this track from Avicii as a reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFBC2vS8Ej8I have a few things which I'm not happy with and think could be improved:
- It gets repetitive after a while and I think one of the reasons is because the chords and melody are 4 bars long instead of 8 bars.
- The drum fills and FX are really bad, I struggled a lot with them, especially white noise.
- There are very few instruments (piano, pluck, crappy acoustic guitar from Live and a bassline) and no layering going on.
- I think some pads and/or stabs could also help adding some variation.
Overall I'm happy with the arrangement and the track's vibe, but I really plan on making it better based on the feedback I get. I'm also extremely open to collaboration on it if any of you fine gentleman think it would be worth your time (I'm using Live).