Nice start ! I'm liking the feeling of it.
My main feedback would be about the drums. In my opinion that would be the biggest part of such track, to really give the rythm and some thump.
Kick: I would like to hear more low end on this, maybe a separate sub or 808 with a longer tail to emphasize that slow feeling melted with strengh. I notice you don't have much low end elsewhere so that might sit really well in the mix
Snare: I think it lacks some clarity. Maybe by adding a hat or any other kind of high percussion. Personal taste, I would love some tail on the snare, maybe with a sample, maybe with reverb only on the high end sample on top
On a more general side, a bit of reverb on the different elements might add some really nice space. It feels a bit "small" as it is
Keep it up !
