You have some good musical elements in this track, but I'm just not feeling the groove.  The genre is trance, but maybe it's more toward a harder style of trance.  I'm not an expert on that. If not, I would like to see you work more on the melody to try and give it more flow and groove. Maybe change the timing of the notes in the melody a little to give it more push.  You can do it and still keep the original melodic theme.  Just my opinion.
Rob