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Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« on: January 08, 2016, 02:48:33 pm »
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This is a track I am currently working on. Any general feedback would be appreciated. Also as you will hear currently before the drop there is a vocal shout, which is currently recorded by myself and sounds pretty atrocious, if anybody with a half decent voice would like to feature on the track it would be hugely appreciated!

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2016, 03:15:52 pm »
Heyao,

I like the drums. They heavy and wet enough. a bit powerfull compared to the rest but it's cool. You could use a bigger, if you have one, sub. I like what you did with the detune thing in the break. The pluck sounds lovely.

The drop could use some more power. (Sub bass should be enough, to fix that) More Supersaws could also work.

The second break could use a little variation, more than being the same as the first one. Vocals after the build are a bit too dry. Put some reverb on it ;)

Anyway this is good. :D

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2016, 05:30:40 pm »
Heyao,

I like the drums. They heavy and wet enough. a bit powerfull compared to the rest but it's cool. You could use a bigger, if you have one, sub. I like what you did with the detune thing in the break. The pluck sounds lovely.

The drop could use some more power. (Sub bass should be enough, to fix that) More Supersaws could also work.

The second break could use a little variation, more than being the same as the first one. Vocals after the build are a bit too dry. Put some reverb on it ;)

Anyway this is good. :D

Thanks Babasmas for the feedback really appreciate it! Will look at adding a sub, probably just a 3x OSC on the 3rd octave with the top end taken all the way off, and will also play with the vocals.

Thanks again!

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2016, 05:35:48 pm »
Left comments on sc! TLDR; Nicely produced, i were kind of confused by the structure and the energies
I would write something here, but I'm too lazy to do so

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2016, 05:38:18 pm »
Left comments on sc! TLDR; Nicely produced, i were kind of confused by the structure and the energies

Thank you just had a look and I understand what you mean, I'll try and take less out at the point you thought it was going to drop, so it's more obvious that it's still part of the break! Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2016, 08:37:15 pm »
The drop is magic <3
Mix can be better :)

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Re: Vocalist & Feedback Needed [Future Bass/Heaven Trap]
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2016, 08:45:57 pm »
The drop is magic <3
Mix can be better :)

Thank you appreciate the feedback and support! Any advice for improving the mix I really struggle with getting a good mixdown.