Hey Tyler!
Love the track name! I know the pop culture reference, and I love how the mood of the track reflects it.
There's two things I can point out that could use improvement. The first is the bass-line. While it carries good low bass energy, and doesn't appear to clash with the kick (rather, compliments it quite nicely), there's not a lot of sound above the low bass area (above 150hz), which is where your bass starts to gain it's presence in the mix. The result is that there's a bit of a hole around that low mid area (150-300hz or so, approx.) and it creates disparity between the low end and the rest of the mid/high content. Like there's a gap in the spectrum.
The second would be the crunchy sound from the get-go. Its like a distorted loop or shaker. It's got a lot of content in the 'pain frequency area' (3khz-5khz), which stands out and makes it sound quite harsh to the ears.
This track is full of atmosphere and melody, and it makes for a great listen. I loved how the main lead going into the track climax acts as a sidechain trigger against the backing pad. It creates this really cool rhythmic effect that not many producers use these days! It also gives the lead a lot more emphasis which carries really well into the main part.
I've followed on SC because I'd love to hear more like this!